|Reviews for The Unexpected Return|
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/14/2014
pleased pleased updates
| lily chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
Um...Hi I have a questin... I really like it and maybe...can you add my character?
name: mary kissa kangleon ( haft filipina)
looks: dark and light thick brown hair, black eyes, fair skin light brown and smooth skin
attractive skin not like other filipina girl were totally black but not black as that some were light and others white skin but my mine was only lighter brown skin and have long hair
and I have cute chinise eyes.
Personality: shy,curious,fragile, reading books for old people , smart talking
Best friend: Rose and Albus and if an additional character is added then that one too
place and home: in Godric hollows neighbor with the potters
NA: muggle born
Best subject: Quidditch, herbology,charms,Care of Magical Creatures,Potions,Transfiguration,History of Magic, Apparition, Music,Earth Magic,Muggle Music, Frog Choir.
Worst: Potions(most especially), Divinasion, Astrology, Alchemy, and others subject.
first reaction to reach hogwarts and see Hagrid gasp and fainted and wake up directly and gasp
siblings: oldest Siblings hyra kangleon, hukin kangleon, sidney frans, aishia and I am the last one
parent's mother jonalyn and sidney
my good attitude: friendly, helpful, humble,
my bad attitude: tempure like ginny's and lily's tempure look like. like them
| 21emrald green eyes chapter 4 . 4/19/2014
I love it!
when next chapter that the few of the death eater knew
that they are alive; and the'y some ways to revenge and kidnap
harry potter youngest son;
| GinevraMollyWeaslyPotter chapter 4 . 1/9/2014
UPDATE IT RIGHT NOW!
| KATE chapter 4 . 11/22/2013
Can't wait. When will you update your chapter?
| rb2312 chapter 3 . 11/15/2013
Nice reactions and reunions.
Definitely see james and sirius currupting their name sake. Though they will now have two angry red heads to deal with.
I think when molly and arthur find out they will be over joyed.
Perhaps they will bring news of their own suprise visiter.
(Really hope you can bring fred back. Dobby too. Maybe all these returns were his doing)
Just an idea. How about the reformed kreacher now being hermione's elf. And like an extra uncke to rose and hugo.
Can not wait fir the extended family to meet the new returnees. Wonder how the wizarding world in general will take the news.
| Zatarra12345 chapter 4 . 11/10/2013
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| the394thdauntlesscake chapter 3 . 11/6/2013
I'm surprised that the kids asked so little questions... in fact, I'm surprised that they ALL asked so little questions...
They do not show enough emotions... try to change that please? Thanks :)
| gleefan2009 chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
love it please write more i can't wait to read more
| 8Lottie8 chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
| PotterLover590 chapter 3 . 6/4/2013
Love this story! Can't wait for next chapter!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
i love it is so sweet as well. :)
| DeathEater'sDaughter chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
This was amazing. I can't wait for more. Please write where the meet Lily Luna. Please.
| Dragons-Twilight1992 chapter 3 . 4/17/2012
This is very good please continue soon:)
| doglover500 chapter 3 . 1/21/2012
Great chaptere. You should bring fred back. please update soon. It's amazing.