|Reviews for The Lord of Light|
| PGHammer chapter 16 . 16h
Okay - so the jackals have actually CAPTURED the lion - NOT killed him. If I were YOU, Palpy, I'd have to be asking myself - why? (Fair question in several ways - the Alliance knows a LOT about Vader - enough to actually WANT him dead - yet he isn't dead; instead, he's quite alive, and in good health. What do the jackals know - that Palpy does not?)
| PGHammer chapter 13 . 17h
Oh, yeah - angry he is! (Anakin, I mean.) Bad news, Palpy - what you tried to sweep under the rug is out, about, and extremely ticked at you! Instead of taking his daughter to the Death Star, he let her escape (a very UN-Vader thing to do!) and is instead going to the DS himself (sans retinue). Meanwhile, Harry successfully finishes his wooing of General Winter (and surprisingly, neither Obi-Wan OR Yoda says so much as "boo" to Harry's pitching of woo - which they knew about). So, what is Vader going to do when he gets to where he's going?
| PGHammer chapter 11 . 17h
Talk about the past coming to bite you in the arse - Lord Vader runs into his own daughter - and I think it just hit him harder than a gut-shot from Chewbacca's crossbow blaster would. (Just what BS did Palpatine TELL him?)
| TiminNE chapter 39 . 3/17
I would love to read the story started at the end
| CMVreud chapter 26 . 3/12
Y'know, with you fix on Harry Potetr and SF-crossovers...
I just recalled that the Reaper-programm runned for years.
No, but this mayyyyy~be a nudge somewhere. Especially with colliding Galaxies and such...
| readgold2000yahoo.com chapter 33 . 2/11
Thought this was a great story, but the ending was too Jumanji.
| Tamha chapter 11 . 2/5
OMG! I'm excited to see how Vader finding R2 and C3PO off the bat will alter everything he does (especially since he now suspects that Leia's his daughter and the Emperor lied to him a full year or more early). The fact he found them over Tattooine, as well, I wonder how he'll take that.
| Guest chapter 39 . 1/30
| Blazeb79 chapter 39 . 1/29
I wont lie i figured the ending would be shite, i just couldn't see a good ending with him being who he was, having to always be reborn so when the super crappy ending came i was like eh' ... You write very well and you have original ideas which is good. Story it self was fun but after the first few chapters i noticed it would be very difficult to make it a happy ending.
| Blazeb79 chapter 20 . 1/29
Story is fun and creative. I could do without the interlude in all honesty im just skipping it.
| Jamr chapter 1 . 1/17
you do know this is a kids site with kids stories and an M rating is not going to stop children from reading here PORN IS NOT GOOD HERE
| StormScythe chapter 39 . 1/9
This was fantastic, though I disagree with your assessment, I think the original one (the second version) was much better. The only thing I don't like was how all the action at the end was just resolved by Harry knowing how to build stupidly powerful missiles. I can understand how he's supposed to be powerful, but it just took the struggle away from everyone else. Overall I loved it though.
| EagleRay chapter 39 . 12/5/2016
It's a very tragic end (both versions), and I'm sad there will be no more of the Harry from this fanfic continuity, but I guess there's not really any other place you can go after that, right? Personally, I preferred the peaceful ending of forever mage better, but that ending left me wanting to see what was next for Harry too. I guess there's just no perfect way to end it. I did love the way Harry finally ended his fight with Amanda, though. Very true to the Harry you've created.
| ShiftFrame chapter 39 . 12/4/2016
So I'm going to assume, that the extra day DLOL chapters are like a rewrite for the original? Because for a second I didn't quite get the ending and then I skipped all the way to the end of the DLOL chapters to see if the ending was different, and it kind of was and that it made a little bit more sense. Especially after reading the epilogue.
This story was fantastic, in if you end up deciding to flow into the DC Universe with good old HP, know that I'll be reading along.
Keep creativity flowing!~
| EagleRay chapter 21 . 12/4/2016
Huh. Your mention of divination here made me think of Trelawny. I wonder if she actually was seeing all of Harry's deaths in the future and it just turned her bonkers-eccentric?