Reviews for Dinner
heya chapter 2 . 6/10/2011
i like it! its creative :) good job. i like the Angeal and Zack part lol but of course the first lemon was awesome 2 :P
Pink Tubby Custard chapter 2 . 5/22/2011
:3 nice one-shots.
Purple Pallbearer chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I loved this story. It was kind of rushed at the end but the story ended on a sweet note so that makes me happy. Not that the hard core smut didn't. XD
DTDY chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
very nice.
Dragi chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
wonder if zack will think twice next time
Dragi chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
aww so cute hope u also maybe write a sequel for cloud and sephy too
siarafaerie-101-miss chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
Naw, i love it! you shold continue on until cloud becomes one of them too and joins the group, then finish with a AxZxGxSxC chapter XD

lol, just an awesome suggestion .
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
I like it! **
sunset in love chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
whoah... naughty puppy got punished, although it's a bit sad that cloud won't belong to zack too, they could make a very cute couple... i love this story, and wondering if you would make a mini stories out of this, and updates here and there about most lovable AGZSC without any serious plot, just something they do on daily basis? that would be awesome!
UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
hahahaha poor zack lol
lalstice chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
...ummmm...well, the story and plot is a little weird, but i like it nevertheless. its nice and sexy, but its just that there is a LOT OF grammar mistakes. sorry. had to say it. it sounds like past tense in the beginning, but you start mixing up the present and past tenses, making it difficult to understand. but, nice story! very sexy.
Gratai chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Yes please :3 I would loveeee to read it.
Zorrina93 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
aaah i dont feel like such a stalker now cause someone else has reviewed with the same sentimant as me! Definetly a sequal is required! Ha i feel like im demanding chapters from you a little too often now xD

Mirokou chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
definitely write a sequel this one is getting faved