Reviews for Troubled Feelings
nazurath92 chapter 1 . 2/13
Thanks for the story I enjoyed it :)
MiniMochi-x chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Nice :) Just a bit of constructive criticism here, you often swapped between past and present tense throughout, so try to stick to one or the other in future. Sorry if I sound rude (I honestly don't mean to!) it's just a pet peeve of mine. Anyway, cute story :)
Graffiti-Kami chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Yes, they should definitely go there again. That was awesome! Natsu can be so dense sometimes! It can get really frustrating, just realize that you love Gary and that he loves you too, you moron!
KilalawakerX3 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
._. I LOVE IT! **
Dinonii chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Cute 3!
I like it :D
azab chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
i loi loved it a lot :)
animeyaoigirl chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
This is a really good fanfiction!
Lucifer98 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
This story is damn smexyy 3 I love the sex scene xP
IshiGen chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
I love this story, but i kept imagining another character instead of Gray because it was spelled Grey in the whole story
Sir Shirkin chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Awe x3 Those two are cute 3 and you capture them well 3
Treasure Family chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
I love it. Great job.(-)
AnjoRemix chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
awwwwwwwwww kawaiii! 3333 and TY old lady! rofl!
Sanao Mikaru chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
sweet . .

i like this :D
LucyHeartfiliaFT chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I got a nosebleed...ugh...all over my bed :( but, I LOVED IT!
Crazyanimelover1289 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
You should make another version where this is all reversed, Gray being the one who eats the apple and Natsu being the 'heartbroken' one. That would make an amazing alternate story plot line.
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