Reviews for The Art of Losing
readingpower chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
This was sweet. It made me smile and I felt happy reading it.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
God, my chest...

my chest was felt sting when America act like he was distance to England.

but then when the reason why he act like that was revealed, I think my chest blooming flowers...

I want to cry... :'D
Tre Corde chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
...I actually cried.

I don't do that often, at least not with a purely text-based medium. This thing you've written, it destroys me. Colonial America is absolutely precious, as is his painstakingly crafted letters. So childish and innocent and heartrendingly sweet, and the unconditional love on both sides just...just...

P-Pardon me while I go compose myself. Dear me, I think I'm wrecked for the rest of the morning.
Heuress chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
This... I'm... I can't... this was too adorable! The cutest thing I have ever read! I love those two so much. This story made me feel so emotional, like... how? How can anyone be as good a writer as you? I loved this so much, this was absolutely brilliant!
Ashburntstars chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
I LOVE England and child America! So cute! :)
honey-vanilla11 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
i truly love how England honestly had no idea how to raise kids but he tried so hard to be good to America anyway. also, the fact that they obviously made each other very happy was simply heartwarming. and this piece had truly done justice to this beautiful moment of their relationship!
northstarwarriorqueen chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Great job! England and America are so cute this way! I can't ship them because of this adorable relationship!
Ms Goth Girl chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
You bastard, you! I cried horribly and snot is dripping from my nose! So beautiful! So, so, so WHAAAA! Even he got those words wrong, I still find it cute!
Emily chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Oh. My. GOSH.

I just... WOW.

Like... WOW.

*sniff* It was so beautiful! You wrote both England and America beautifully. America was just like a little kid! The tantrums, the letters, the spelling, the crying... Seriously... BEAUTIFUL. Oh my gosh...

Ohmygosh. This is my favorite Hetalia fanfiction of ALL TIME.

Now if you'll excuse me, I need to have a good cry...
switmikan74 chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I love this.
Auto-Alchemechanicist chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Aw, this is so sweet! They are so IC and I could just imagine this all. The letters and his childish spelling are so spot on and cute that it made my eyes water! Very insightful and a great take on how America would react to England's departure. I love it ever so much!

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mofalle chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
This was so cute, I even had tears in my eyes at the end. love chibi America and him being a crybaby. The bunny letter was my favorite.
ThenSheFlew chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
So cute!

But really sad.
Algorithmic Paradox of Love chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
America is so cute, and I just love this fanfiction. It's really well written!
LovelyToMeetYou chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
This was absolutely perfect. You truly have a way with words! I loved it.
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