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ThatCreepyGothDragoon chapter 1 . 3/6
x0xalexis8 chapter 1 . 2/14
Noo i want moreeeee!
kisarafoxdemon chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
well you could always make natsu the jealous in love with grey and the girls acting comply scary grey could get frightend by the girls and askes natsu to pretend to be a couple and natsu would be in love with and grey will fall for natsu
Just an idea great so far
silver mermaids chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
so is natsu the uke i love his as a uke and
Mira will wear a cut outfit
Juvia is so sweet and will be shy
Erza is very fast and will scare the shit out of him
Lucy is nice and take him out but he will think it just as friends
Tomanyfandomstochoossefrom chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I love the India of this story!
And it's the ace of clubs...
DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
this is both interesting and promising. u can have Natsu spoil every single date "accidentally". just saying. why didnt u update? UPDATE! tanomu!
TwinsAreAwesome2 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Its okay that's what has been happening to me, but please update when u get the chance
azab chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
i loved it a lot! :)
Moonlight-MidnightYaoi chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Ooooo this was getting interesting! Write more!
KawaiiTenshiGakutoMukahi chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
you should continue this, its pretty funny and interesting. haha, can't wait how their dates would go, may natsu will be the one to subtly interfere with it... please continue and update this soon.
omgponies1 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
is there going 2 be another cause this sounds interresting
yonhtna12 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Ezra- she is scary sooo she either threaten gray, have sex with him at home

Lucy-she is kind of sweet and nice but can be evil when she wants to be soooo she can take him somewhere like a carnival, festa, party or on a date

Mira- she is the same as Lucy but is a model so she can put on a sexy swimsuit or something

Juvia- she is kind of evil when it comes to gray and do anything to get gray, so she's either sabotage the other girls and go on a date with gray or she get a love potion, love spell or something,

Can't wait to see natsu reaction and wats he going to do, please update at soon as possible.
Yugato chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
No, no. -Shadow Heart Hawk-eye- Gray is better uke than Natsu . I can't wait to continue :D And I think than Mira can has date on the beach ;3 and she's trying seduce him with very sexy swimsuit ;p Gray is so innocent when he see naked body women .

And I know than you're writing super Natsu reaction...Oh and don't forget about Family okay? ;)
Awesome Shadows chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
This is definitely gonna be funny! Can Natsu be Ike though still over protective? Gray seems like a better choice for seme...
ilovemarkaxel chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
i love this ; i want again
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