Reviews for Competition
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1
There called clubs not clovers
AncientAlliance chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Good story. The plot is interesting and it would be cool to see how each meeting goes in the guild. Personally, I look forward to the Mira and Gray date, but it is still cool to see the foiling that each person has planned to mess up the time while they are out with Gray. Either way, this story has an interesting plot. I don't entirely get the story, but that is why I'm reading to find out. Anyway, good luck. This has a suspenseful plot. Peace till next time.
kelsey lester chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Plz update!
Fireslash Icedra chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
I love this it's great please keep going !
Staticy Fox Atra chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
YOU HAVENT UPDATED SINCE 2011! NOOOOO! YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS! I think you should start off with Erza.
Yuliajones chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Oh I hope the next chapter comes my heart is getting all excited
Keep doing a great job
ThatCreepyGothDragoon chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE UPDATE. I WANT TO KNOW WHERE THIS GOES OMG I'M GROVELING. NO JOKE. PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE.
x0xalexis8 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Noo i want moreeeee!
kisarafoxdemon chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
well you could always make natsu the jealous in love with grey and the girls acting comply scary grey could get frightend by the girls and askes natsu to pretend to be a couple and natsu would be in love with and grey will fall for natsu
Just an idea great so far
Toni the clock chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
so is natsu the uke i love his as a uke and
Mira will wear a cut outfit
Juvia is so sweet and will be shy
Erza is very fast and will scare the shit out of him
Lucy is nice and take him out but he will think it just as friends
Tomanyfandomstochoossefrom chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I love the India of this story!
And it's the ace of clubs...
DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
this is both interesting and promising. u can have Natsu spoil every single date "accidentally". just saying. why didnt u update? UPDATE! tanomu!
TwinsAreAwesome2 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Its okay that's what has been happening to me, but please update when u get the chance
azab chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
i loved it a lot! :)
Moonlight-MidnightYaoi chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Ooooo this was getting interesting! Write more!
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