Reviews for I Want Your Love
da 2 for 2 days chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
I played that damn game over and over trying to make sure everything with my rivalry romance with him was perfect, this is so perfect and so him!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Poor Fenris... I like the breaks in the pages; very well written. :)
purupurin chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
It was great the way Fenris' tension was building up, and then suddenly just dropped of at the end with that last line. Well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. 3
anonaurinko chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Like it. Nicely written. Especcially the use of repetitions.

Thanks for writing!
melissa chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Aww, poor Fenris. On the first playthrough I went with Anders but now that I know how he betrayed Hawke I don't like him to much anymore. Fenris on the other hand... :)
drakontion chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Oooh, delicious Fenris jealousy and angst. Lovely!

Well written, I love the minute changes to repetition to drive home the point. Because we've all been there and jealousy is all about that one thing running round in your head in little circles...

Thank you :D
Ventisquear chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
you captured all the confusion, jealousy and anger very well

I hope you'll continue this
fifespice chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
love it
Aesir23 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
That was great, I absolutely love how you wrote this piece. :D
T.I.M chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
*Citizen Kane clapping* More please...rosebud
sadistickunais chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
This was a good take on how Fenris felt about Anders and Hawke as a couple, and his own tortured feelings about Hawke. I didn't get too much Fenris in my game when I played since I'm a Mage-lover...but I still liked Fenris! And I wouldn't mind him with Hawke.

Loved it! Nicely done.
Zoe Whiteraven chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I love it and u should write again!