Reviews for Affairs of the heart
laceshadow chapter 5 . 4/9
When Peter said "his commander" I thought he was talking about his cock ;)
vampiregirl31 chapter 22 . 1/30
aww this story is amazing
kantorkan chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
sorry but this is such a badly written story i can finish.
kantorkan chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
need to work on your writing a bit ,girl. reading this story is kind of like reading a grocery list.
kantorkan chapter 4 . 12/5/2013
Carlisle needs to be pulled apart and burned for being so rest of them need to hunt Anal Eddie down and pull his head off and bury it after burning the rest of his body.
kantorkan chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
you really do need to find a Beta to help with grammar.
Hero Dean Chicken chapter 22 . 10/8/2013
its sad when people died its great story
acetwolf94 chapter 22 . 7/6/2013
Nice. It was a good story!
Mika the Dark princess chapter 22 . 4/25/2013
Lov it
babygirl2928259 chapter 22 . 4/16/2013
sad to see the story end... loved it
babygirl2928259 chapter 21 . 4/16/2013
awesome story
babygirl2928259 chapter 20 . 4/16/2013
this cant be good... love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 19 . 4/16/2013
amazing chapter
babygirl2928259 chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
poor peter and bella not only did they get three girls but in less then a week they got three sons as well... lol... love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 17 . 4/16/2013
poor sam how could he not see it? love the story
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