|Reviews for Perhaps With Time|
| Claire Bloom chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Like the other reviewers, I am intrigued as to who was narrating, but that is a good thing for me, because we don't need all the answers, just enough intrigue to keep reading.
I have to ask though, you mention Carlisle changed four vampires and had two join his coven. The Vamps he changed were Edward, Esme and Rosalie, and the two who joined were Alice & Jasper, so who would the fourth vampire be that he changed?
It was interesting to see how another vampire perceived Edward, and wanted to make him happy again, especially since vampires are inherently selfish creatures. It was nice to see 'emotions' in them.
I liked this entry and wish you luck with the comp :)
| BELAVERA chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I don't understand this story. What happened to Bella? Is he there to die? Who is talking? It can't be Jane, she just wants to hurt him (& everyone else that she can get away with).
| DreamingPoet1988 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
You are killing me with not knowing who is talking... I hope this story gets continued afterwards.