Reviews for Selfish
mdsngrc chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Aaaaaannnndd I'm crying. Wow. So much feeling with so few words.
rubell chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Are u trying to make us cry?
Rareangel chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I really enjoyed this and would love to read your other stories. Could you send me a link if possible?
IzzyBabeFanfic23 chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Im already crying...Is there gonna be another one?
Edmazing chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Oh. My heart just breaks because even if he does feel guilty, it's so, so bad.

Moving his family to pursue his dream... only to neglect and cheat on them. Oh. And the resentment. Were they already rocky before they left. Does it matter? How could he cheat?

I want for him to redeem himself, but yeah, is it too late?
Unimaginative Olena chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
I'm crying... you did it in less than 500 words, it means you're really good.

Claire Bloom chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
This was very poignant and I'm glad he realised, before it was too late, that changes and compromises needed to be made.

I know you don't mention which couple it is, so I'm assuming you allow the reader to make that decision themselves, for me I like to think it was Edward, probably because he is my favourite. :)

Good luck with them comp

beegurl13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Oh wow, I really like this. :) You did a great job with the emotions in this. My heart was breaking for both of them. I would be curious to see more of this, how it would play out. It could be any pairing, really. You have so many possibilities here. Great job!
Golden Swirl chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
*sob* So sad!
BELAVERA chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I hope he keeps his promises.