Reviews for Undone
MLaw chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
love the idea of getting into their heads! well done~

thanks!

M.
Avery1 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I SO LOVE THAT LAST LINE!
Firefall chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Thanks for the flipside of the earlier quiet interlude. Both were a joy to read an fun to imagine in the mind's eye. Of course the image of Illya soaking wet with his shirt barely clinging to him...deliciously invigorating. And Napoleon sopping in his dapper (no longer) best, and seemingly enjoying it too...Yes fun indeed.