Reviews for Lovely
Planxty Lewis chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Wow, this was great!

I'm really picky about my Lily/James fics, since they're my favorite, but this was wonderful! Good concept, and well carried out!
The World's Best Auror chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
I'm glad you made it into one really long one-shot instead of lots of chapters.

I like how you portrayed Lily and James. They're my favorite HP couple, second only to Hermione and Ron. I love your story. Keep up the good work! :)
Jac R. O'Hara chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I've always loved to read fanfictions about James & Lily, sadly most of the time it annoys me. Some were poorly written and most of the time everything seemed out of character. Yours however, weren't. I love how each character felt real, just like they were in the book. I love how show the progress of James & Lily's relationship. It was a good read, great in fact.
Carmen Delta chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Nice story, but I do have one problem with the final drabble. You mention that Lily had already put Harry to bed, hours after be usually would have been. But canon dictates that James was playing with his wand for Harry and Lily had to take him and run.

Other than that hiccup, a nice story.
sti chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I love it! I cant believe that this is your first story, it is so perfect!
blackolives10 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I love, love, love this story!
RavenSoulSister chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Beautifully written, and overall a wonderful story to read. Great job with this, really. I loved Severus' moments, especially. I thought you captured them perfectly and realistically.