Reviews for Heartbeat
ktyk chapter 25 . 8/7
Incredible story! Loved reading it :) thank you for writing and sharing this
Terrence Rogue chapter 25 . 7/21
Loved this, thank you.
ktyk chapter 14 . 7/17
Not them angry, pissed and snarlingggg at the idea of Sakura on a dinner date lolll
ktyk chapter 13 . 7/17
I have been binging this INCREDIBLE story and I am obsessed! Your writing style, character development and sprinkles of fluff and actions are perfectly mixed together into the ultimate book! I’m so excited to keep reading x3
KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 2/10
Interesting story love this very much
Dasgun chapter 1 . 11/21/2022

Obsidian Cherry chapter 25 . 7/13/2022
I decided to give this fanfic a try because there’s nothing else that I haven’t read. In the first few chapters, I was hesitant if I should continue because I found that Sakura is so annoying here. She’s out of character (she’s matured so much in the anime), and sadly this just negates everything she’s worked hard for. Itachi is way out of character too, but I figured if you didn’t make him OC, then you wouldn’t have a story at all. Just like how someone previously pointed out here, I don’t get how they became attracted to each other. The relationship has no real substance. I’ve read way too many fics before that made me just anticipate them getting together because of the way the story builds up, but this one just missed that. Halfway through, I almost wanted to stop reading altogether, but I honestly wanted to know how this would end.

There were also a lot of grammatical and spelling errors that I found myself mentally correcting. These are my pet peeves so reading through was a challenge for me.

In the past, if I read this, I probably would have loved it. But now that I have lots of ItaSaku fics to compare it with, it’s just… average. Not a fic I would read again.

However, I have to say, even if practically all characters here are OC, most especially Sasuke (dear God I can’t imagine him saying ‘his royal bitchiness’, that just makes me cringe every time), I laughed so much at the scene where he heard them having sex. LOL probably my favorite part of the entire fic. That, and the fact that ItaSaku had 6 children. Somehow that makes me happy.

Anyway, thanks for the entertainment! I wish I could only say good things, but this is my honest review.
DaisyDear chapter 25 . 6/29/2022
well written!
crylo-ren69 chapter 25 . 5/25/2022
I loved this story! I’ve been reading on this site for a loooong time so I’m happy to have recently stumbled upon this story even if it eluded me for a while ! I love the way the characters are written and it was so enjoyable to read from start to finish. Thank you for all the time that you put into this !
crylo-ren69 chapter 12 . 5/24/2022
You write so welllll I’m reading this all with such a huge grin (where appropriate lol)
crylo-ren69 chapter 10 . 5/24/2022
Omg when he said he ‘already did tell her she would bear a child’ I literally was like “biiiiitch okay!” out loud, I’m dying
kazuyaryo chapter 24 . 4/19/2022
Thankyou for sharing.
kazuyaryo chapter 25 . 4/19/2022
Amazing fic.
Satan-Bird chapter 1 . 12/9/2021
I would fucking end this Sakura in seconds if I had a fucking Sharingan. I feel like I'm reading a case study on abusive partners.
DaniValero chapter 25 . 8/27/2021
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