Reviews for Heartbeat
Mishtique chapter 25 . 3/22
This was adorae 3
KateKat1992 chapter 25 . 2/27
Great story. I loved reading it!
Marquesa-Izumi chapter 25 . 2/10
Kkk
Adorei!
harucody chapter 25 . 1/16
oh god theyre having so much sex! I love it! I just cant imagine sasuke w ino bec I still love sasusaku
harucody chapter 24 . 1/16
"It's your penis, so it's your fault!" HAHAHHAHAHAA I LOVE THEM BOTH
Tris chapter 9 . 9/10/2018
The self-pity is annoying seriously
Haruno chapter 7 . 9/10/2018
Ca me soule que dans les fanfictions on depeint tjs Sakura comme faible. Elle est tous sauf faible bon sang ! Elle est extremement forte et intelligente ! Elle est loin d’etre fragile
daliapv.perez chapter 4 . 7/11/2018
Interesante.
Theo1987 chapter 25 . 5/13/2018
I love this!
sbaurora chapter 25 . 4/10/2018
Amazing story!
StillBlooming37 chapter 20 . 3/19/2018
Ughhhh this chapter is making me weahhhh I can’t even explain it
StillBlooming37 chapter 19 . 3/19/2018
Oh my god I’m going to cry
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 25 . 3/19/2018
This was such a great fanfic! I really enjoyed reading it :)
StillBlooming37 chapter 15 . 3/2/2018
Awwwww shit Sai smh and lol
KuriKashi chapter 25 . 2/23/2018
I enjoyed reading this fic. Itachi is totally OOC but tha'ts fine coz creative freedom.

At the start there was a variety of characters and a small amount of usage of them. But over the course of the story there was less variety and dialogue, understandable but something to take note of.

The dialogues between the characters were hilarious and entertaining.
I really appreciate how succinct yet vivid your sentences/paragraphs are since they make it so easy to read and digest the story.
Well done!
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