Reviews for First Time
rubell chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
That could insite some major mess!
Claire Bloom chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
*eyes widen with shock*

With just 100 words, you wrote something sexy and with a twist. Very clever. :)

Good luck with the comp

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TheRainGirl chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Well that was just teasing!
LaLaLa81 chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Lovely. Such a perfect use of so few words. Each counted perfectly.