Reviews for The Tent Scene SMeyer Didn't Want You to See
bethi13212 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
That was unyieldingly bad. LMFAO!
ujemaima chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Hahahahahahaha! That is the cheesiest lemon I've ever read - you definitely should win!
VampLover109 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Wow, i think i laughed and vomit at the same time. LOL

This was so awesomely gross, and shudder worthy. D
veggirl3 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Pure awesome. I don't think I've ever read a lemon so gag-and-laugh worthy
Jackie K Paper chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Dude that was just wrong . . . FLoved it! Well done :)
GuilChris chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
ha ha ha ha ha!

Thanks for this...I really needed a good laugh! Cute...Wolfsplode...Loved it!
Chicklette chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
this was hilarious! Thank you!
MandiJo17 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I think I barffed in my mouth a little...that was seriously disgustingly disturbing...good job and good luck in that contest! XD

Mandi Jo
Barbara Ann Pattinson chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Omg! I was ROFLMFAO the whole time! Great contest!
froggyqueen chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Lmao! I needed that!
Mr. Shy Rockstar chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Wtf Tiff I have no idea what to say omg xD TDhat was bad lemon holy shit.

Sadly I read word for word XD omg.

This is like, newb shit :P I think you wont said contest HAHAHAH :D
Oracle Vas chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Da damn. This should be required reading on how not to write a lemon. You handled it hilariously. I hope it wins the contest.
CharliDenae chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
OMG! Tiff, that was frickin' hilarious... and strangely hot at the same time. LOL!

I loved all of your sexy adjectives... heeheehee!

"Ball sachet", "gooey chamber", volcanic bliss-juice" and, my personal fave, "manly baton". Great job! Your lemony pineapple was delicious! Thanks for sharing!
smelsies chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Oh my gosh...I have tears. That was so fucking funny!
lemonbutt chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Oh damn home girl squirted. Hey girl hey.
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