Reviews for Farewell To A Peaceful Afternoon
TonksftMemories chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Hahaha! Cute and in character.
chorus chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
First, about your A/N: You say, "[E]ven though it really isn't… anything." Not true. This is a moment, a moment in time, captured into words. Praise to you for capturing it so well!

Gratuitous critique: Actually, praise on your punctuation. Very few people get right how to plural a word that ends in "s". Most do "s's" which is wrong. The right way is "s'" which you did.

I was confused in one place, at first: "[T]hrowing his book aside to ravish Sirius." The change from active (throwing) to passive (to ravish) is perfectly legal and acceptable. Keep in mind continuity, though: 'throwing his book aside and ravishing Sirius.' End of gratuitous critique.

See, I _told_ you I read all your stories! :) This is an excellent one! (standing up and applauding)
LooneyLunaIsTooLazyToLogin chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Wow. That was... great. xD Loved it, as usual. xD
HPJellicleCat chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Awwwwww. XD I miss your Remus/Sirius stories.
ilfreitas chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
awwe, so cute.

And Remus calling Sirius a wanker.. :D