|Reviews for Fruits of Flirtation|
| Cateagle chapter 18 . 8/13/2013
*laughs gently* QUite a story and a well-told one. I do like how Harry dealt with Dumbledore, in the fullness of strength rather than in the fullness of emotion. An excellent ending and denouement.
| Goldkey chapter 18 . 7/10/2013
This story was divine and I love where it ends. In my mind they go on to do great things and nothing stands in their way. Awesome story and keep up the good work.
| Jynx chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Hey sicko kids read here too... Child porn is frowned upon in jail
| noylj chapter 18 . 5/3/2013
| phhsdj chapter 18 . 4/9/2013
,i love this so much
| voidblade6 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
That is really scary.. I mean I have watched horror movies and read books that are terrifying yet... This takes the cake.
| Engrprince chapter 13 . 3/7/2013
I am still impressed with your AU. It is very good. I generally like HP/SB. I just feel sorry for HG
| Engrprince chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
i enjoy the story, but your Hemione is I believe out of character and it seems you do not respect this character too bad
| GatorLHA2 chapter 18 . 12/22/2012
Good story thanks for completing so few fanficts ever make it this far
| lordblink chapter 18 . 10/31/2012
This has definitely been an interesting story. I've thoroughly enjoyed the read, and plan on seeing what else you have posted.
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/11/2012
Absolutely brilliant story! I enjoyed it enormously. Great mix of canon characters, oc's, and a non canon plot. A few things made me pause and think.. was that in the books? Overall though absolutely great. A few repeated words or odd repeated sentences, grammer mistakes and three names spelt wrong. Over all I found twelve mistakes in 126,529 words, which is extremely impressive. As a beta reader myself I'm impressed with either yourself or whoever beta'd your story. The plot was great, I would have liked to have read a bit more at the end before it skipped to two and a half years later, but still extremely good.
I wish you the best of luck with future writings and I hope I am able to read more of your work in the future.
| Ibskib chapter 18 . 8/19/2012
Nice story although it might have worked better just as a drama/fluff piece, I didn't find the whole wraith thing or Congo particularly engaging.
I feel a bit bad for Luna, I was hoping that it would end up as a threesome, since I found Luna the most interesting of the seven. I also didn't quite get the whole healing her wounds thing, I guess it was something related to her emotional wellbeing, but it just seemed strange.
At the lunch Susan and Luna had obviously became closer, and a first I thought it was a threesomes hint, did Harry and Luna share a night around that time? That could be what the memory transfer was about, if Luna and Harry did it with Susan't blessing, unless their night together was before the engagement, but I can't see why exactly.
Considering how hot and bothered Harry and Susan were getting, it find it a bit unbelievable that they could wait three years before having sex.
| michaeldavidgeng chapter 18 . 7/21/2012
a very nice story
| Timor888 chapter 18 . 7/5/2012
This was amazing.
Though I might have misunderstood something, In the chapter where Harry takes Susan to Grimmuald Place, Mrs. Black said that she wanted Susan to be nee Bones, and when Susan asked Harry about it he said that since the house of Potter had risen to the rank of Ancient and Honorable house of Potter that each house required a lead lady,
So I personally was rooting for Luna to recieve the Lady Potter nee Lovegood title.
Other then that this was truly a work of art, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
(P.S. Would you mind taking a request? Because Personally I would LOVE to see some more Lunar work of this quality. (Harry and Luna))
Please and thank you
Timothy A Smith
| Timor888 chapter 9 . 7/4/2012
Michael McBride, Are you sure ya don't mean Michael Weston? ;D
Love the Burn Notice Reference,