you killed me 6 times with this god damn amazing story
i could't stop reading
but was almost afraid of finding out what a disaster that relationship was
and awesome ending
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and harry missing that snitch due to care lessness
i wanted somebody to die then
Luna rocks...

I really enjoyed this story!

I like it ! So the flashbacks and current events are in my opinion masterfully interwoven together so we don't feel too out of our depth. We as the reader get a look into the end result and slowly get to fill the details. This lack of knowledge spurs us to read more and in my case at least got me to read it in one sitting.

This was a hell of a ride. I tore through this whole story in one sitting, I just couldn't stop reading. Some damn, damn fine Harry/Luna drew me in, but the whole thing was a package deal to keep me reading. The best Quidditch writing I've seen, easily

Call me niichan
Great story, in all aspects however the rather open ending has left me dissapionted so I humbly ask you for a sequel that you can either post here.. Or send me what you think will happen to harry and luna the same way the epilougue in the deathly hallows had worked.
thank you for reading my review
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yay for happy endings!

dang, luna really had a terrible time after the events of the books: its good to see both our heros on the road to recovery though

heres hoping that harry pulls out of his drunken spiral, he seems to be recovering though: i wonder what luna's been up to?

its really sad to see someone's life fall apart, i look forward to seeing how you put things back together

you do a good job of using quiddich as a framework for a broader story

ive never been a big fan of ginny, but your developing their (doomed) relationship very well

Excellent writing, especially the Quiddich scenes. Really captures the feel of the game, and intersperced with the backstory makes a riveting read.

Hammy

We don't really drink earl grey, in fact it's so unpopular it's not all that readily available.
Tea doesn't come in packs it comes in bags and one can get boxes of tea containing g between 40 and 200 bags typically tettley and PGtips are two main brands. But every supermarket also stocks their own brand as well as a few other lesser known competitors .

This has been an absolutely lovely story. I could be a bit biased, because Luna was always one of my favorite characters, but I've enjoyed every sentence of all six chapters. It's extremely well-written, with particular skill in capturing each character's personality through dialogue, and I enjoyed the flashback/narrative structure with each chapter. I also appreciated the honest approach to relationships, as it felt like it fit the story's theme much better than a more rosy approach. I hope to read more of your work in the future, because this story has earned a place on my favorites list.

Nice. Thank you.