Whoops, I apologise for not leaving a signed review there! I forgot I wasn't signed in! A bonus for you then, this certainly deserves it.

Amusing reference to top gear. Rather obvious though.

I've got to give you credit for pulling an honest relationship collapse. True, it was a little depressing, but it was very real. I could believe that... I would be sad for it, but I would understand and accept it.

Hmm, I reckon you walked a bit too far into the muggle world. Forget Asprin, use potions. Name your beers funny names. Let us feel like we're in the universe! I suppose you could mix it in as a plot device, but it was a little jarring to someone on the look out.

Luna's cutting was surprising, but well played out. Hers and Harry's romance was also very well done. I would have liked a little more fluff, and the ending could have been a little smoother (though that thing with Ginny's semi-reconciliation deserves credit as a fantastic bit of writing) but take what you can get.

I've got to commend you on the detail and imagination you put into your quidditch games. They were fantastic, by far the best I've ever seen. Rowling included.

Now, as to a larger detail, which needs to be said. This story was great, well plotted, well written. I don't know if you have a knowledge of real life sport and details therein, but it seemed so. If that is the case, think seriously about getting this published (with all Harry Potter universe removed, of course). Add in a backstory to make up for what we already know, add a slight bit of late story drama (the relationship aftermath or affair fallout may suit), add some extra fluff at the end, and you have yourself a novel. Not a huge one, but it's solid. If you want, make your own fairytale world and mix this in. Adult fantasy anyone? There's a good market for that stuff these days.

Anyway, critique aside, this was a fantastic story, entirely enjoyable from start to finish, and as it is now 3:30am, I can attest.

Kind regards for future endevours, and at the very least, I will be looking at your other stories.

-Fallen Dragonfly

Hi, I just want to say that I really enjoy your stories. I'm a great supporter of Harry/daphne fics but I've always skipped yours because your summaries aren't all that compelling. I was so bored one night that I decided to give yours a go and I realized tat your stories were fantastic. So yeah I suggest you work on your summaries.

Top Broom was incredible. I could hear Jeremy's voice reading those lines!

I love HP fanfiction many of the authors are better than JKR. I have read two of yours. This and Letters and you are by far the best I have read

Good story, thanks for making me stay up so late, it's going to be impossible to wake up tomorrow!

Really interesting, unique, fun, dramatic, other adjectives, story. Thanks for all the hard work!

There is one problem I have with this chapter. Well, two really.
The first is that I can't read the Top Gear (Top Broom?) part without hearing Jeremy's voice.
The second is I can't get this stupid smile off my face after reading it.

If anyone else has this problem, I need help curing it.

Very enjoyable and well put together yarn. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
Z

For some reason I am greatly hesitant to read post DH fan fiction. I will be honest I am very in the fact that I am very new to the world of fan fiction. It seems to me that it would be so much harder to truly capture the feeling of the Hogwarts Universe several years down the road. I encountered this story several times since I started reading fan fiction, I had always past it by. I am still unsure why I decided to open it this time, I am so lucky I did.

This was an extremely wonderful experience, I greatly enjoyed your writing style. My favorite character from this story was Titus Button. I enjoyed this so much that I have been continuing through your catalog. I have just finished the third story so far. I don't know if you still read your reviews but I decided to post one for every story you have given me the opportunity to read. I know I will at least start every story you ever post on this site. I have little to no experience with Vampire: The Masquerade, but soon that will not be the case lol.

Yup, fine for a sports/romance fic, time for a villain or a mystery for an additional subplot. You've given him a great base, now think 'Dick Francis' and go from there.

Really good story and i wish there were more like it

Thank you for this great story. You are by far the best author i have seen in describing Quditch. Really well done thank you and i hope you write more stories like this.

pretty good, not sure I liked how you did the flashbacks... but I can get it and it was probably the best way to tell this particular story. Pretty good.

I guess you've never heard of a wizard's oath. Harry just had to give a wizard's oath to show he wasn't cheating.

I had a really good time reading this story. I couldn't stop reading.
Thank you for this amazing story.
I wish you the best of luck.