Great story! Loved the characters and the way the story was told

Great story. It was interesting the way it went back and forth between his past break up and the current games. However, you made it work, and that must have been difficult. You write really well, and the story had a nice flow to it. I will certainly look for more stories by you, and sincerely hope to see more like this in the future.

I like the slow start to their relationship, and that Luna has both jerseys. What a sad background story for her. I really like the way you had Harry look her up at the zoo, and the fact that they spend so much time just talking to each other. Great scenes.

I think you are doing a good job here. It's not like Harry had any dating experience in canon. He married very young, and with the way you describe it, to someone who isn't interested in him as a person and with whom he only has quiddith in common. Such a sad, and unhealthy relationship from the start.

Looking forward to more with Luna. I also really like Daphne's character in here, and Harry's friendship with her.

After getting to the end of your current updates for "Pure Blood Princess" and enjoying it so far I felt like seeing if all your other work was up to the same sort of standard.

I wasn't disappointed.

You worked the scene breaks really well, almost like you were telling two stories at once. You also threw in two parts I like in the fandom, the breaking up of Harry/Ginny and the formation of Harry/Luna although in all fairness the story was almost crying out for Harry/Dapne for a long time.
The most refreshing part to your work so far is your characterisation, your characters are never "flawless" and always have their problems i.e. Harry and turning to drink, Luna and her loneliness among other things, Ginny not being about, Ron meddling etc.

Another good story, well done and I look forward to the rest.

Great fic

Another great read. Thank you. It's not very often I put a story on my favorites list but this is the second one of yours today.

A very wonderful tale. As my first step into the Harry Potter fandom here I'm glad that it was your story I stumbled purely by chance into. A very riveting story. I especially appreciated the fact that the fall out between Harry and Ginny was due to them being mutually at fault. I have to admit that I always saw Luna as being a better fit for Harry. Thanks for sharing this gem!

Kind Regards,

EJ Daniels

Masterfully written and woefully under-reviewed.

This is my favorite chapter after all of this Harry have no regrets at this point :P

Good story. Nice retelling of a relationship going to hell through normal means. Though it seemed like Ginny never really got into it at all. Didn't like as much as your other story, but very nice. Realistic how Harry's opinion of Jason changed. A good read.

KRONWALLED! _

This is either quite the coincidence or you have exemplary taste in hockey teams, lol. I shrugged off Jason Williams since that's not too specific (and I'm not fond of the hockey player), but I started jumping for Kronwall. D

Really like the story, first Harry/Luna story I've read, also really like reading Quidditch in general and was a bit sad Harry didn't finish a season in the later books. Looking forward to the last chapter.

I really enjoyed your story. A great ending with both Luna and Harry getting the happiness they deserve after so much sadness in their lives. I liked the perspective of the frequent flashbacks. Thanks for sharing your story.

This was absolutely adorable.

Nicely done, and I think you captured Ginny perfectly (whatever was JKR thinking!)

Thanks for a great read!