Reviews for The Quidditch World Cup |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OK. I love the story, but seemed a little slow in spots. I was looking for more Huna and less Quidditch, even though the story said it! It is a more Hinny death followed by Huna interspersed around the Quidditch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() RR. Forgot how much I liked it. It was sad sometimes, made me remember i don't like gunny. And it was cute. I liked that their struggles were shown, htat they weren't suddenly perfect. All in all pretty good story. And The Swedish creature 3 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It was really good overall. My only complaint would be that it could be very confusing to tell if we were in the past or present. Sometimes it just wasn't separated but either way, it would be a lot better to put a date every time it is switched. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just finished this story and wanted to tell you how much I loved it. I usually hate the way Luna is depicted in fanfiction but this is perfect. Harry as a quidditch player worked as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful ending. Writing HEA endings are so much fun! I once got an idea and wrote the epilogue 1st. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoy your writing, how you write the Quidditch matches is awesome. I love the F1 nods as well. really enjoyed the Top Gear but in this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A distinct lack of Luna in the chapter, but I only just realized the lack of Ron and Hermione. This story and the way you tell it is very intriguing |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was beautifully done! I love me some Happy Ending, and you more than supplied. Adding to Favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Surely there are anti-hangover spells! I know for a fanon fact there's a potion for that. Why is Harry using aspirin? Also ... d'AWWWWW! They're so CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this story and Luna deserves happiness with harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Thanks for sharing - it was absolutely worth the slog through the ‘Ginny years’ to get to the sweet Luna payoff. The way you wrote the matches was great too. Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ending and a good story. |