I would have said that this was perfect but the 7th chapter was really garbage. You made Harry seem like an asshole for no reason. Who would tell their wife they're being ridiculous for being uncomfortable in a house that reminds them of a dungeon in which they were raped(probably) and tortured? Seriously, what the fuck? Who would say that? And what is it with people complaining about floo travel being difficult. It literally takes you hundreds of kilometers away in only a couple of seconds. This all feels like just to add some colour to the story. Unnecessarily i think.

That was nice.

Ah, so same world, different story. Nvm then!

Ha! Gabrielle made him feel awkward. Can’t remember if that was this chapter or one before. Still got me to laugh. I’m reading this prequel before the other story. Took me a while to understand why everyone seemed familiar (it’s been a while...)

Hmmmm.
Well, they are Working on things, which is a Huge Deal.
I think you showing genuine conflicts that they have to work on is so much better than 'they lived HEA blah blah blah'.
Thanks for the update, for Aurora and for Snorkacks :)

*happy sigh*
A thoroughly bewildering ride at times, but well worth the trip.

Luna is wonderful, the jersey number idea was really well done!

I'm very disappointed that he's in a relationship with her but still screwing whatever he catches.

I'm a bit confused. He's with Luna, but honestly considers screwing random women to pass the time?

The Top Broom segment was fantastic, thanks!

You say that they both realize that they are guilty, then what's with Resting Psycho Bitch Face Ginny?

I like that you didn't start her out as malicious, just the fact that both were young and honestly didn't know one another well enough to consider engagement, let alone skip straight to marriage.
In the end, he married an idea just as much as she did.

A bit choppy due to the (acknowledged) lack of scene breaks but definitely enough to make me wonder what's what, what happened and where things are going.
Prediction: Ginny is with Gwenog, Katie doesn't know who to believe when it comes to the lies (Ginny was always a better Slytherin than Harry) and Harry... well, Harry will hopefully be less clueless by the end than he has always been :p

Nice story, thank you.

Really, really good. Better than I could manage, certainly, and makes me feel a bit silly for some of the things I've claimed about people writing Luna.

10/10

While I like Harry/Ginny stories, more often than not, I've ran into those Harry/Other which make Ginny out to be a cheating bitch. Surprisingly, that's not what you've done in your story, but incredibly self-centered is another trope you've used. Nothing wrong with using tropes, I'm just disappointed that all too often that's how Ginny is written.

Anyways, moving away from my late night rambling, onto the review. I thoroughly enjoyed the tone shift of the story, starting all depressed and moving to happy and once more in love. We see directly from Harry's point of view how his relationship and seasons went on and your story more or less showed the progression between Harry and Luna (Which, while unnecessary to state, does happen to be my favorite pairing in the fandom, even though there isn't much from the books to support it. I just really enjoy how they are written together in fanfics.) from two people who are reconnecting to falling in love.

As a final point, I really enjoyed the epilogue, which brought Luna's father's mythical creature into existence, and having it such that the reason they never found it was because they always went in the summer and it was a winter-oriented creature was a nice touch. Aurora is an adorable name.

As always, keep writing, keep being awesome, and stay safe during these times,
Green