|Reviews for July 4th|
| Person chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
Dude, totally awesome story. I love reading it.
| lavillalover chapter 8 . 11/11/2011
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one! And whatever the. "suprise" is. Though I think it may be rated x in which that case I most certainly will not read it.
| Renuki chapter 8 . 11/10/2011
Oh, hello. Hi, Peter. :D
This is going to be interesting.
(As for questions...
1. Vegeta/Bulma from Dragonball Z. (either that or Dynasty Warriors...)
2. Mary Sues and reallly, reallly bad grammar/spelling.
3. Heck if I know, to be honest. *ponder*)
| Blood on the Sunflowers chapter 8 . 11/10/2011
HAS GENERAL SPASM!
OMFG BEST STORY EVER I MEAN LIKE WOW!
I DONT EVEN KNOW WHATS WITH THIS STORY THAT IS MAKING ME SPASM LIKE AN IDIOT BUT FOR SOME REASON I JUST LIKE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
| Mintbunny07 chapter 8 . 11/10/2011
Honhonhonhon, this us getting very interesting! Can't wait for more! Update soon!
| 2bblue101 chapter 7 . 11/9/2011
I want answer the questions for fun, so I'll answer them ;D (oh, and I'm one of those people who still don't believe in social networking sights OTL)
1.) How I found was when I was looking for scanlations for the manga of Megaman NT Warrior. And, I was young, so I had no understanding of the gay porn you speak of OuO
2.) What I hate about fanfiction (though I love it so much OTL) is when people go overboard on the pairings, or in generally, the story just plainly sucks. Examples of a sucky story would be if it had the most unoriginal story line on the face of the planet, and the author did nothing to fix it. Oh, and grammar/spelling mistakes are a pet peeve of mine .;
3.) Well, I wouldn't know if you're doing anything wrong, because I haven't read any O'd your stories. But, I do believer you're on the right track and just keep on going with the writing you give us, and your faithful readers will always be loyal :D
| Leah chapter 7 . 11/9/2011
Please finish July 4th! Ive been waiting for moths to read the finished prduct. I love this story so please dont just leave it as it is!
Love from a big fan :)
| Hika chapter 7 . 11/8/2011
I discovered fanfiction through pokemon. Seriously.
I hate when they make OCs(Mary sues) important. It's annoying. Also when the original characters are out of character. Bad written stories. Aha.
I like fluff. Lots of it. And plots that make sense.
Your AN was moving. Good job (:
| Hitsu4HinaEva -Hari-Sama chapter 7 . 11/8/2011
I wanna be friends! LET'S GET NAKED! D
I didn't think I would, but this was something I actually needed to hear... Or, read. Derp.
You is awesomeful
-I discovered it when I was 10/11. And thus I began heading down this amazing, perverted world...
-I don't like the search engine. Damn Yankees. -shotlolwhut-
-Ideal? Never-ending USUK fic. Human, possibly Gakuen AU.
| shakespeareaddict chapter 7 . 11/8/2011
I actually kind of want you to keep this note up. It's heartfelt, it's real, and it's really entertaining.
But my dear Sincerely Ash, you are not a total piece of shit. You are not one of those jerks who does not update a story for a year or so without telling anyone why. You did not exactly abandon this story and not even bother to put up a "discontinued" notice to let everyone know you're not returning (and a story of mine that's on hiatus STILL gets more reviews than my two living, breathing works-it's ridiculous, isn't it?). You actually cared enough to let us all know why (sort of) you didn't put anything up for so long, and all that, even writing a letter. Believe me when I say, there are bigger pieces of shit out there.
As for your three questions:
1) My cousin introduced me, actually, and I sort of had what I'd now call a "fangasm" when I first stumbled upon Star Wars: The Clone Wars fics. Repeat this when I found Hetalia.
2) I actually hate ongoing mindless smut/lemons. I like a good random lime as much as the next person, but just having this horrible thing where everyone is driven by sex explicitly, and no one gives a shit about anything else even though there's a frakking WAR going on is so stupid. I usually don't flame anything, though. It's a waste of time.
I do love, however, the freedom and acceptance you get here. If you write some weird thing you think no one will ever read, chances are someone will read it anyway. There will always be someone crazy enough to read your stuff, even if you think it's total crap or something along those lines.
3) I realize I am not going to get this from you, but I'd enjoy a SW/Hetalia crossover. Or something along the lines of AngelBaby1's Star Trek fic "Atlas", which was pure epicness and I love it to death. I am actually really happy that someone's translating it into German, because I'm learning German and it's the sort of thing where I'd be more than glad to spend hours plowing through it, paragraph by paragraph, with my pocket German/English dictionary glued to my hand, just to say I did it.
I hope that whatever it is that flushed your life down the toilet is over soon. And believe me when I say, it will probably get better than this.
(And Shakespeare himself inserted sexual puns into pretty much every scene of every play. Juliet's speech about what she'd do to Romeo if she found him after he killed Tybalt? Funniest thing ever.)
| lavillalover chapter 7 . 11/8/2011
I discovered fanfiction from my mom
I hate how people on FF under rate things
and my ideal Fanfic would be a really good shounen ai story (USUK) and leave me hanging that never got boring and lasted forever (pretty impossible).
| vampiregirl878 chapter 6 . 11/7/2011
I LOVE THIS AND YOUR STYLE OF WRITING! X3
| ForeverAPirate chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
I LOVe this fic O.O I really enjoy reading it, and can't wait for you to update! :D Great work, and thanks for writing it :P
| CaptainCynical chapter 6 . 10/1/2011
Yay, update. :) I love USUK when they're being saps. Although, the sappy bits also made me feel sad for Arthur. I really want Alfred to wake up and I'm looking forward to that. But for now, I'm enjoying how Arthur's still trying to act normal. I really like your style of writing. :)
| LeahVic chapter 6 . 10/1/2011
I love how this fan fiction is turning out, I love how Arthur and Alfred's relationship developed and I love how brash you are mocking your own work as a cliché. Please finish it! Im dying to know whether Alfred wakes up and if Matthew comes back into the story :)
Congrats from a huge fan! XD