|Reviews for Severus|
| Katharina chapter 7 . 9/3/2013
Thank you so much for this story!
Its the best one Ive read so far ... full of emotion of all kind and telling it in a way that fits with the books completely!
This was the story I was looking for! Thank you so much!
| crosslight chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
I really love how you managed to write a James and Lily story along with Severus's presence and his love for Lily. I like how James accepted Snape's love for Lily and how he really grew up about it; it wasn't just beating a rival in a contest for him. The last sentence was brilliant, I like the deeper meaning of it and gah I will never get over James and Lily. Ever.
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
I feel so bad for Snape.
| irmaida chapter 7 . 8/10/2013
I think this is one of your best stories (although I love your other James/Lily stories too!) But honestly, this one was heartwrenching and just so *right* on so many levels.
Especially this last chapter. ;-;
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 7 . 8/2/2013
oh my goodness this one chapter made me cry so much! Its beautiful; loved every bit of it!
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
awww james! Ajgjskshsodhshhsvsajj I'm sprry my reviews arent the least bit helpful, but I dont have much to ssay anyway, your writing's always really good :')
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 5 . 8/2/2013
oh gosh this is so sad! Of Lily ever found out that it was that kiss which eventually pushed him to become a death eater... :(
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Mary is such a dear :') and hahahah I loved that bit about James having a soul underneath all that hair! XD
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 2 . 8/2/2013
awww poor sev! Really liked this chapter!
| jessiejellie chapter 7 . 6/13/2013
So. The end of your James/Lily stories. Thank you for giving them to us, they have provided hours of joy and amusement, love and sadness for me. So thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. These are amazing.
| Harmony Rocks chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
You my girl are undoubtedly the best lily/James author ever :) amazing absolutely amazing :) I'm crying at how stupendous this piece is! A brilliant way to exit from the James/Lily world :) Well I guess this is goodbye : so I hope in everything else you do you are successful and I will keep re-reading your stories if I need to put a smile on my face :) Goodbye
| Miss Dumbledarcy chapter 6 . 2/8/2013
| horses4504 chapter 7 . 1/8/2013
Story was really great except for her kissing snape at the end. He was in Voldemort's inner circle. That's definitely not something she would have done
| Ally chapter 7 . 9/9/2012
It's a well-written story for sure, but I'm a bit troubled at how lightly everyone is treating Lily cheating on James like that. That's just... not cool. Hell, I don't even like Snape and it's unfair to him, too. But she married James, and is having a child, and in that situation you don't go around kissing people for any reason. Even if they were just dating exclusively for a few hours, it's not right, or fair, it's cheating. And I don't think Lily was the type to do that whatsoever (I also don't think she had any romantic feelings for Snape ever, and Jo pretty much confirmed as much).
Also, sorry, I just snorted a bit at Snape being described as "handsome". It wasn't just a hooked nose and greasy hair, he had terrible hygiene (yellow and crooked teeth, eek). Don't think Jo was shooting for anything near good-looking with him.
| ShortySC22 chapter 7 . 8/25/2012
Loved how the characters were all written here and loved the ending.