Reviews for Mirage Island Vacation
RecentAnonReader chapter 37 . 3/6
... Are you still gonna continue this? If I recall, it's just the last chapter left...
I like your Vocaloid stories (I'm also a huge RinxLen fan xD) but this story's been left along for a long time now... Wouldn't you want to complete it soon?
Dia Newman chapter 35 . 10/20/2013
YOU BETTER UPDATE THIS GODD*MNED STORY OR I SWEAR TO ANY EFFING GODS/GODDESSESS THAT F*CKING EXIST I WILL DIE IN F*CKING ANTICIPATION D*MMIT!

Thank you, and have a nice day.

/SHOT
Dia Newman chapter 37 . 7/14/2013
*starts swearing loudly* NUUUUUUUU! UPDAAAATE! Ideas? Erm, Daisy becoming Greens guardian or whatever and erm... Yellow n Red n Green meetin up and killing barty and erm... Clichéness Red kissing Yellow :3 When they get home Blue meets the boys and Blue and Green have a one-night stand- I MEAN hook up and Yellow and Red get married on the spot.

I'm to cliché. Oh well.

If you want a SERIOUS idea, feel free to PM me :D
TreblePlayer chapter 37 . 7/11/2013
Hi, Meridian Diamond! I'm SpadeProductions and a newbie here. I love Mirage Island and I'm really glad you are still making chapters for this story. I seriously can't wait!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 37 . 3/26/2013
Wow summer starts early at your place. It still feels more like winter here. Yup it's too cold to go out without a coat or for a skirt or any summer clothes. Anyway... I can re-post the suggestions I had for the final chapter then re-read the last chapter and send other suggestions in a PM. It's been a while since I read the last chapter so I really need to well freshen my memory.

Anyway here are my suggestions from review 35:
like Green tries to fight of the control of the jewel and has a battle in his mind against Kyogre, you see that happen in a lot of manga. Yellow, since she has the Green orb, maybe she feels like Rayquaza calling out for her so she unconsciously looks for the Pokemon who's asking for help. Barty is having trouble with controlling Rayquaza, who's going on a rampage now, because of that and the Pokemon goes in a rampage, so Barty thinks that Killing off the possessor of the Green orb will prevent his plan from failing.
Red, Gold and the others are trying to find Barty, but instead they get caught in Groudon and Kyogre's battle. Daisy wants to save her brother, so Red and Gold try to save Green, who's in his mind battle with Kyogre.
And maybe Bill can show up and have a hero moment, Like saving Daisy when Barty tried to kill her or suddenly climbing on Rayquaza's back and throwing Barty off the Pokemon.

I hope that gives you some ideas, I'll post some more suggestions later. :D
NekoShooter chapter 35 . 12/11/2012
{-Sighs-} But terrific story so far, You're a wonderful writer! Can you make some other shorter stories of SpecialShipping? Maybe some with lemons? ;D

Keep up the good work!
NekoShooter chapter 36 . 12/11/2012
NEEEOOOOOOOOOOOW
WHYYYYYY
DID
YOU
GO
ON
A
HIATUS?!
FUUUUU!
Not fair at all D:
After all that reading I get a hiatus...and you aren't making a lemon either...{-Wails-}
piplup225 chapter 36 . 10/4/2012
awww... thts sad... i hope u get some good inspiration 4 the story real soon cuz i really wanna know wut happens in the end.
authorgal282 chapter 36 . 9/23/2012
Hey! No worries. You get inspired when you get inspired. It's not something you can control. Besides, this is a fanfiction, not a job. You're not getting payed for this, and at most it's for fun. Forcing yourself to write would just make it a chore, and in life, we don't need to add more chores! So have fun, and write when you like to write!
P.S. If anyone gives you nasty messages for this, just ignore them. They obviously don't understand that writing is more than just slapping some words on a page. Just have fun and do your best!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 35 . 9/23/2012
Another awesome chapter. And sorry for not noticing you posted this chapter sooner, for some reason the update alert wasn't in my mail.

Gold should stop being a perv. Girls hate it when you talk about their chest sizes. XD
Barty is seriously a effing bastard and he needs to be killed.
If you have a writers block fr the next chapter, then maybe I can give you a few suggestions, like Green tries to fight of the control of the jewel and has a battle in his mind against Kyogre, you see that happen in a lot of manga. Yellow, since she has the Green orb, maybe she feels like Rayquaza calling out for her so she unconsciously looks for the Pokemon who's asking for help. Barty is having trouble with controlling Rayquaza, who's going on a rampage now, because of that and the Pokemon goes in a rampage, so Barty thinks that Killing off the possessor of the Green orb will prevent his plan from failing.
Red, Gold and the others are trying to find Barty, but instead they get caught in Groudon and Kyogre's battle. Daisy wants to save her brother, so Red and Gold try to save Green, who's in his mind battle with Kyogre.

I hope this is enough inspiration for you. :D I can't wait for the next chapter

And have you started with KH3D or another KH game? I can say 3D is so awesome, well now i am playing Pokemon Black2. XD Hahaha screw the waiting and let's so to ship it immediately from the country of origin! If I can play KH Re:Coded in half Japanese half English and other games in Japanese then this will be no problem XD Thanks for the leek, I can use it for some Miku dances XD... well I am out of snacks... so I'll look for a cake with a pic of my dog dancing XD
splitheart1120 chapter 35 . 8/1/2012
Hopefully they win against Barty... and save Green...
Mt401 chapter 34 . 7/14/2012
If yellow has the green orb, how did Barty transform into wolverine? Is there going to be some twist where Barty has the luminous/adamant orb since pearl and diamond are ere? Why can't women stay on mirage island?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 34 . 6/22/2012
Popipo inmdeed Xd i am not sure if you said it because of the latest chapter of my parody or because you started to listen to more Hatsune Miku songs XD, I really love that song.

Oh my you don't know what an otaku is? and your one yourself. in japan Otaku translates as nerd, but in western fandom it's refered to the people who love manga anime, games or music related to that. Vocaloid for example or the opening songs from anime. I am an otaku, my sis is too and you're one too. When I an in otaku mode... its just'my fangirling XD. i call it otaku mode.

Noo Green TT Barty is such a bastard! How dare he make green into ap uppet TT. I hope he get's tortured to hell!

So now Red is finally noticing his feelings for Yellow, Yellow went in a kinda beast mode and kinda started to hurt herself. I hpoe she regains consious soon. Celebi finally decided to help, I wonder why it took so long for Celebi to help them.

BTW thanks for the banana split it was really yummy now back to my wii and finish playing Pandora's Tower, or i shoud just watch how my sis will play Kingdom Hearts re:coded in japanese or cheats in KH 358/2 days XD. God bless the cheats!
InsanityCatXD chapter 34 . 6/17/2012
Yay an update! Red! You love Yellow and you admit it! Kawaii! You gotta love Uncle Wilton's threats! :) So much is going on and I love it! Update soon! I think i over used exclamation points in this review... Oh well!
splitheart1120 chapter 34 . 6/16/2012
Green's lost it, which is bad as it is.

Red and Yellow are losing it, which will makes things really bad if they do go off the deep end.

What's next Gold randomly starting to sing the My Little Pony Theme Song? The apocalypse will occur...
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