|Reviews for To A Safer Future?|
| juniort chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
So far, I find this to be great, though Hibari tends to be more talkative when he grows up. (Just an FYI)
I'm really looking forward to seeing where this is going, it seems interesting so far, and your writing skills are great as well. It wouldn't hurt to shorten the sentences though, some sentences are so long that they seem run-on, which tends to bother me while I'm reading.
Anyways, you did a great job, and although the story says its complete and it seems you haven't updated for well over two years, I'm hoping that 'complete' thing is a mistake, and that you're planning to update soon enough.
| JackFrost14 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
wow, nice fanfic!, :D
please don't forget to update :D