Cringe level maximum 100

I love that Naruto is going to have all four of the ice queens. That alone is worth checking out. Please DONT change the age gap. That’s part of the reason why that relationship will work. I don’t mind Hinata but I can’t stand Sakura! Please no incest.

I get how you feel about reviews. but people are not going to review every chapter. Hell I don't do it sinply because if you authors respond to them you put the answers but not the question. which i find to be confusing sometimes for various reasons.

her being a new mother and getting a demon placed in her child would make anyone hate someone. emotions don't have brains.

only thing I'm upset about is you not adding Sakura to the harem. Just imagine Sakura and Yugao in bed together. Or Sakura and Kin.

the dialogue is trash and cringe af

good

Saying suffering is essential to the rinnigons evolution doesnt excuse filling your chapters with b tier anime filler. Flaming dog shit is still burnt dog shit after youve poured water on it.

Chapter 27 is uslessly dramatic. Youd have great pacing in your chapters if you didnt nuke them with all the introspective self pychoanalitics that the characters "ESPECIALLY" naruto seem to under go every 5 seconds. Theyre in battle. It wasnt several chapters ago that naruto was taught not to loss focus in a battle. That. It. Would. Get. Him. Killed. And here we are at chp 27 forcing a character regression so his god damed rinnigon can evolve. You have a great story. We dont need to know narutos or other main cast characters thoughts all the time. Leave the filler for the anime. And for gods sake clean up your rinnigon evolution tree. If its this fucking hard to evolve now that what are rings 3 and 4 going to need?

Keep up your words. If you said you'll make smth, do it. Otherwise don't open your mouth or put a finger on the clapboard cause you'll get get a reputation of the person who can't be trusted and whose words must be checked if it is smth important.

Hey, you say make review and also say do not target me with flames. You want to be only cheered and get applauses?
Pseudo-rinnegan is out of order and way too easy to gain control over elements. Why don't you make Naruto enhance his chakra control, elemental control, physical and spiritual energies(which together are chakra) control.
Kushina was announced to teach Naruto fuinjutsu, and how does fight for life match with teaching and studying fuinjutsu for the newbie who Naruto was in fuin then?

And this is nice story

search for Uchiha Sasuke from now on", said Sarutobi in his authoratative tone while the others gasped upon hearing him.

"You can't be serious

authoritative tone is correct.
Koharu Utatane was female in the Hiruzen Sarutoby team, while Komura Mitokado, Hiruzen Sarutoby and Shimura Danzo were males in the original story.
And as long as you do not have intentions to change the sex of characters(as it looks like to me), Koharu Utatane would be female.

Kushina is a kage level shinobi, thus why is she so dumb, easy affected by youki and does not plan things in advance? She revealed every one trump card she had. Like that barrier and sharingan. Well, sharingan is acceptable cause Huugas and sencors would anyway figure it out, but barrier is an sure failure.

Nice chapter. Hope Kushina gives couple of punches o old monkey and takes all the money Konoha owes her and Minato, which council, danzo and old monkey took from Naruto as he had to inherit these money etc. And some extra for his suffering. Rob this fucking village that it loses its last pants.