Reviews for Chronicles of My Shinobi's Way
ferduran chapter 9 . 6/4/2011
I love the strong hinata and cant wait to se the reactions of everybody when they see the rinnegan
ForeverFallen76 chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
When word gets out that Hinata has a second stage of the Byakugan, its going to bring a lot of heat to her from the Hyuga Elders. They are going to want to slap a Caged Bird Seal on her and breed her until she becomes barren or dies. The only plus is that they can't do either, as she's property of Konoha first (the Hokage) and the Hyuga second.

So, with her being out of reach that way, they'll try to force her into retirement or marry her off to someone who'll agree to their demands; an ex-amount of children and her INTACT and UNTOUCHED dead body for a shitload of money, power, and a favor to be named at a later date.

This will also put a lot of pressure on Hanabi as well. If her 'failure' of a sister can achieve such a level of the byakugan, then she should be able to with even more ease. Again, this will bring problems if she does activate it, as she'll be in the same boat as Hinata. So, if Hiashi was smart and truly cares for his daughters like he's shown to, then he'll go to the Hokage and voice his fears.

The only solution is to A) disown her from the clan. If this happens, Hinata is free from the Hyuga and they can't 'legally' touch her. B) have her enter into an apprenticeship with a renowned shinobi, but the only shinobi of such a caliber to have enough pull to shut the Hyuga Elders up would be either Tsuande, Jiraiya, Sarutobi, and Kakashi. Other than that, they'll walk all over them.

C) Have Hinata join the ANBU..unlikely to happen because of her age, skill, and experience. D) Marry her to someone who has enough or will have enough political, military, wealth, and social status to protect her. Even if its in name only.

E) Do the same with Hanabi.

F) Pull an 'Itachi' and kill the Elders of the Main and some of the more 'rigid' members of both houses to save his daughters and truly unite the clan as one.

Even though option 'F' seems like the best bet, he'd need the Hokage's 'go ahead' to do such a thing or face treason. Also, with the invasion on the loom, it be foolish to kill an capable shinobi who could be protected and defended Konoha during said time. After that though...

Anyways, great chapter and I can't wait until your next update. Until then. Later.
Ryan Mitarashi chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
For your first story it's pretty damn good Gaki.
Kyu-chan chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Good chapter. Oh and one request if you add on any other girls to the harem please add Sara from naruto the lost towers it was a awsome movie and she was an interesting character plus Kushina could make fun of him saying Naruto must be addicted to her since Sara looks like Kushina's identical twin.
Dark Avenger874 chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Sparda-kun2555 chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Hey man, this is an awesome story. I hope you work on it. I would like to read some more. And for the second stage of the byakugan. Name it hidden petals.
Rise-Of-The-Slient-Phoenix chapter 9 . 6/3/2011

Your story has is an awesome concept i truly hope you complete this story as too many fanfic's suddently stop in the middle, i think that you are depicting the relationships in the completely right manner. as for a possible name of the second Byakugan i suggest heaven eyes (which is Tenmoku i believe)
Guest chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Please hurry and add the next chapter
insanelyproudpervert chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
just awesome man.i like the way u design the 2nd form. Its new in fanfiction universe. Carry on
Wyrtha chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Amazing chapter. I might have to steal what you did with Hinata as it was perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next in Naruto's fight, but I'm really hoping that little thief and his master aren't gaining anything by using their thieving eyes.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
This Chapter was good bby took to long to be good work

I am wating for more.
ark of shadows chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
DUDE you evil bastard how dare you leving such a cliffhanger when i wnwted to see Naruto owning lee and dosu and shocking the living hell out of everybody there all that i ask is for you to continue doing what you are doing cause you are doing an exelent job but please update soon and most of all make it even more epic than this one i mean A NEW FORM OF THE BYAKUGAN THAT IS JUST OUTRAGEOUS but you did it extremly well so keep up the good work.
Heliosion chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Apart from your pacing good work man. Keep up the good work
dbtiger63 chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Loved the fights, the new Byakugan, Hinata's more confident attitude, the skills Naruto has revealed so far and your changing the exams enough to make it feel relevant.


Reishin Amara chapter 9 . 6/2/2011
The second

Level reminds

Me of the eyes of nia from gurren lagaan.
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