Reviews for A Place To Belong
johnnycakewasgolden chapter 5 . 4/14/2011
Oh dear Paul has had a rough childhood! I didn't like how Quil reacted. I love Seth! I don't want Fuckward or Malice to come back to Bella at all!
YankeeGirlNJ chapter 6 . 4/14/2011
Heartbreaking and so well written. Can't wait to see what Sam does to Jacob...
bamagal110 chapter 6 . 4/14/2011
THAT WAS AWESOME SHE TRUELY IS REMARKABLE THERE IS NO WAY I COULD BE TOLD THAT I DID NOT BELONG AND STILL GO ON...
YankeeGirlNJ chapter 5 . 4/14/2011
Love Paul's change of heart. Jacob, not so much.

Great chapter.
YankeeGirlNJ chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
Good chapter. So glad the elders and Sam were aware of the legend. Would love to see Bella kick Jake's butt.
maysnrs chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
I really enjoy this story! The plot is amazing & I LOVE how u have given Bell a backbone! I hope she cont's 2 b this way, a lil badass! Hope u will keep posting soon, keep up the good work!
mayfairmarybeth chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
I love this story! you r doing a great job. i cant wait to c what happens next!
brokenlove81 chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
I'm lovein this story all ready.. cant waitr for more.
defunct2013 chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
I've got to say, I dont normally like fics where Bella is a different type of mythical creature, but you've completely sold it to me! This is gritty and believable without being too dark, and Bella retains her character through her transformation. Love the friendship with Leah and oh so excited for breakfast with the pack. Jacob is a douche though, but I'm glad Embry at least apologised, and OMG, you created a version of Sam I dont want to punch through the nearest wall! Well, I did at first, but now he seems alright. Fantastic, please update soon.
johnnycakewasgolden chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
I do hope this will be anti-Cullen anti-leech! I loathe all of the Cullens, they were too controlling and manipulative and really Bella universe became all about them too quickly for me. I mean really not giving a second thought about leaving your dad and trying to come up with an excuse to leave with your boyfriend of only 6 months and also not be there properly for your dad when he lost one of best friends and you go save your ugly ex boyfriend who by the way should've died in 1918, not good. Ok Embry I truly love him. I loathed Embry had to pretend to be mean to Bella I want them to be truly close like older sister-younger brother. And of course more Leah-Bella Seth-Bella and Embry-Bella bonding please! I don't want Bella to forgive Jacob to easily, let Jake work for it. Update very soon please!
twimama77 chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Very awesome
bamagal110 chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
O DANG HOW COULD YOU STOP IT THERE. WELL BELLA HANDED SAM HIS BUTT AND SHE DID NOT EVEN TOUCH HIM THAT WAS GREAT...
Kathy Hiester chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Wonderful!
Bripearl chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
i absolutely love this story! please update soon XD
ellaryne chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
i love it and very interesting
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