Reviews for Heartthrob
I am Shibuya's Composer chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
According to my favorite stories list, this was the first story that I read from you. And I'm being a bad person because I favorited a lot stories and I never let you a review! Omg! Worst human being ever! (? And so, to compensate my horrible mistake, I'll let a review in every single story I favorited! Yay!

Let's begin! First, the first time I read it I didn't read Colors of the Heart, but I really liked. Of course, those golden eyes makes him soo mysterious...and sexy! *squeals like Selphie and Olette* Aqua eaverdropping omg, I loved it xD

Being honest, I knew Cloud and Leon had something for Aqua... Like, I dunno, common sense? xD And OHMYARCEUS VanNami! I secretly ship them as I secretly ship VanAqua (?) HAHAHA! When they all blushed! Love it! xD

And of coourse, Kairi's love professions of love XDDDD LOL! I actually didn't expect RikuAqua but neither expected Riku saying the wrong name in THAT moment...

AND THE END! OHMYGOOOOD! OHMYGODOMGOMGOMgGahshaks /dies and stops writing/
Le Neko-neko chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Aqua...I see what you did there! XD XD But Vani is still my hubby! XD XD (BTW I do support VanAqua though ;))
thedoggydog2 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Awesome! I loved this!

Could you make a sequel thingy were everyone else like sees them showing affection in public and everyone are like "WTH!"

Pwetty pwease with cherries on top, ibeg og you to make a sequel thingy.
Jae.Lockhart chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
THIS WAS SO CUTE! I loved this. Very much. I loved vanitas. I loved aqua. I loved it. I wish I could have this kind of relationship..
Deliahgirl chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Wow. This was cute and fiery! Awesome job! 3 I like this paring much more than I should now.
Cyber Horse chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I never thought i could see Aqua being jelous

She looked so cute! I love the way you write them x3

I really like your stories, i feel bad for not being here when you were doing your other stories, you know, to cheer you up an stuff. Like the story "Escape" that was one of my fav 3 Im reading all your Vanitas x Aqua stories first couse it my fav KH couple but im planning to read your other ones too.
Skitty 2004 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Oh my dear goodness, this made my heart beat faster as I read this. Vanitas is just way too amazing. If Aqua was going to continue listing girls who like Van, she may need to add my name onto the list! XD

And this story was amazing on so many levels for me because other than the story itself being awesome, I am a huge fan of crack pairings, and even I wouldn't have thought of the majority of the ones you put in here. XD And I really like how you kind of foreshadowed all of them but the Aqua/Tidus. That one was just like... out there. XD

And I meant to put this at the beginning of my review, but since I was too busy saying how awesome Vanitas was, I'll say this here: the way you opened the story was great. Not only is it a thing Vanitas probably would say, but as a reader, we have no idea what to expect, and so we kind of have our heads in the clouds from the aspect that we're not in the setting that the story is. So Vanitas was grabbing us in just as he did Aqua. Totally epic connection there.
Jessica chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Well written VanAqua stories are hard to find since most typically care for Aqua with Terra.

I love this one-shot and hope you continue making this pair more recogniziable in the fandom.
Fancoio chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
You make the Vanitas x Aqua pairing very enjoyable and I hope you continue writing about them in the AU setting rather than the canon since AU makes them much more compatible and less awkward.
whiskedaway chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
way to go aqua xD why oh why was this so short to me? ugh, the best always are... ;_;
XSolXSkyX chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Wow, this had so many wierd pairings. Wakka and Aqua? Olette and Vanitas? Tidus and Aqua? Well, just shows how creative you are. Love your fics!
Ice Princezz chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
XDDDDD go vani get some xDDDDD once again wonderful story :3
TeeHunter13 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Yo,imagine all school fighting for Aqua and Van)

Perfect as always.
Kiryn chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
You know what I always love and adore in stories? When the characters or something take moments to reflect on another character, or if there is just a lot of general realization of how awesome one certain character is. I like this under any circumstance, but as you can imagine, I particulary love this phenomenon when it's centered on a favorite character of mine. In this case, Vanitas. Combined with the fact that this fic has one of my favorite pairings, of course I adore it!

I also found it a nice reversal, especially since I do consider this a sequel to "Colors of the Heart". In that story, we were given a jealous Vanitas, and now here we get a jealous Aqua. They both had to learn their lessons regarding jealousy. And can I just say how much I loved Vanitas's total trust in Aqua? Good boy, Vanitas! You're so relentlessly rational. I love that you choose to focus on the rational side of his character, instead of following the stereotypical path of making him an overreacting jealous prick (not that I think Aqua is really overreacting). You get a round of applause from me!
MusicalSage chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Uwah, this was so good! Ha ha, I loved the tellings of the crushes each respective person had. Especially Leon and Cloud; I can imagine that the possessions each men owned are very special to them, so imagining them laying those items down was hilarious to me. This one-shot was certainly the icing to a fabulous day.

Hmm, was Yuffie's cheer something like, "Van, Van, you're so fine, you're so fine I wish you were mine!" or something? I just recently listened to that song, and I just suddenly thought of that. A perfect cheer though, know?

Argh, but I still can't decided between Terra/Aqua or Vanitas/Aqua! Darn you and your good skills (and don't worry, I mean that in a good way!). You made Vanitas seem very awesome-now, I wonder if there's someone that's actually like him in real life...ha ha! And then there's Terra...oh great, back to square one... But cookies as the solution to everything? Priceless.

Good job on this awesome one-shot!
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