|Reviews for Harry Potter: the Serpent Lord|
| Zeran X chapter 3 . 3/9
Snape is a pompous ass
| Wolfang21 chapter 69 . 3/7
This is getting good, also I must ask if you are accepting OC wizards into the story
| Wolfang21 chapter 57 . 3/6
Glad Ron failed in the duel, he was the complete definition of the seven deadly sins.
As for the original and redone endings they were both good, but I like the redo netter because I find it hilarious that Ron lost within 30 seconds by just an illusion, by screaming like a girl, pissing his pants, and fainting. I bet his brothers are disappointed to be related to him just by how arrogant he has become
| Draconis chapter 63 . 3/4
I loved this it was soo good. Then you put Katie in the towel said leave it to our imagination and I just lost. Had to hit the back button before it could ruin anything for me. Nope nope nope. It was a lovely read up until then, for me personally. Good luck with the rest of your story. I shall imagine the ending for myself lol.
| Wolfang21 chapter 41 . 3/5
Harry got some booty
| DarkLord98 chapter 68 . 3/2
And Dumby's plans just came to bite him in the ass
| Mackayo chapter 69 . 2/23
Wow, what a story! As for the second wife, who cares? :-) (Make it Fleur :D)
| bookwormtx chapter 69 . 2/22
this is a very great story love the bashing and the character Draconica thank you
| bookwormtx chapter 68 . 2/22
awww I wanted Draconica to really take down Malfoy
| bookwormtx chapter 67 . 2/22
nice lemon this is a very great story can't wait to see what happens to malfoy
| Hachichiyyin chapter 10 . 2/21
Too much 'tell', not enough 'show'.
You repeat 'the green-eyed wizard/boy' way too often.
The lack of dialogues makes the tone of your story quite dry.
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/17
A yellow snake eye? Gross...seriously hoping that it's not permanent.
| Axcel chapter 23 . 2/16
Undead basilisk servant, I hope!
| Axcel chapter 19 . 2/16
After reading "Inquisitor Carrow and the God-Emperorless Heathens" and "Inquisitor Carrow and the Bureaucracy of Failure", I can no longer see Su Li as anything other than a berserker who tears young acromantula limb from limb in a frenzy of righteous fury. Yeah...
| Axcel chapter 13 . 2/16
In the books, the company that makes Nimbus seems to have stopped after the Nimbus two thousand-one. The books also show that, while the N2001 is superior to the N2000, it isn't by enough to truly "outstrip" the N2000. Selling the "old" Nimbus at a far lower price while the new ones weren't sufficiently better to be worth replacing the old ones outside of professional sports likely caused the company to brink on ruin. The final push would have come when the Firebolt came out.