|Reviews for For a moment we were|
| Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I love the style that this is written in, as if it were woven instead of written. The style of the writing very much reflects the theme and the mood of the story. I think it's amazing how you were able to write about a sort of mild romance- or at least, some form of emotion, between Hei and Havoc without being too blunt or cliche. This, while it's only about 500 words and quite short, is able to paint a vivid portrait in the mind of the readers and its content is plentiful as well. Very good work. I like this very much.
| ficklejam chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Perished from feelings! Loved this and your writing too ;A;
Also, I really have a soft spot for this pair
| Awesome chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Very nice. )