|Reviews for What If|
| Kyra Larie chapter 7 . 4/19/2012
Please update this story! I am loving this story!
| GinnyPotter0183 chapter 7 . 4/19/2012
I love the new update
| GinnyPotter0183 chapter 6 . 1/7/2012
I love the story and hope you will update soon again
| Bloody moon cat chapter 6 . 8/10/2011
I love your story! I really hope you update soon, this has to be the first Salior Moon story that I've read that still updates!
| UnknownApple chapter 6 . 7/24/2011
Andrew's hero name should be Masked Prince or Lucifer.
idontknow. those are just some names from the top of my head :)
PROS : good chapter. i wonder what Endymion and Serenity did behind the barnyard.. LOL. *dirty thoughts*
CONS: kinda short. i would've liked it better if the chapter was longer.
OVERALL: satisfying chapter. keep trying.
| sangoscourage chapter 4 . 4/25/2011
Excellent chapter! Nice to see that both royal families have sibligs and can easily tease each other in a loving way. Maybe mama should get a hint of the shinagens. ;)
| sangoscourage chapter 3 . 4/8/2011
Good once again. A little more description 'though. :)
| sangoscourage chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
excellent, and i could really see what was going on. Much better in length.
| TheChickKickingTheSodaMachine chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
This is great. I hope you finish it!
| Squirrel Stone chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
A bit rushed, but otherwise good.
| Squirrel Stone chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I often like to give stories like this a chance, but most of them don't follow through all that well. However, this one hit the mark. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and I'll be sure to send more readers your way. Good luck with the fic!
| sangoscourage chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I think you have a good story going here. I think the plot is a little to quick; slow it down a little. As a co-author advised me; just let the story happen, evolve, the ending will come on its own.
I like to see of Darien/Endymion having a sister.