|Reviews for Harry Potter and The Veela|
| ianramos22 chapter 25 . 9/21
Been following this story for along time and it still is captivating.
| GhostFang GF chapter 2 . 8/27
When the girls wanted Harry to sign stuff, why didn't you just say bras?! Now "brassiere" is on my search history thanks to you!
| Daviddiddle chapter 25 . 8/18
i love this story excited to see if it will be continued good job either way though
| SpartanBoi chapter 1 . 8/11
Can’t even get through the first chapter which is a shame because these older Harry stories usually have a lot of potential. However it’s just awful how Harry is complaining how his parents hate him but the very first time we see his mom she is being kind and asking whether he wants to go shopping together. Like holy, man’s acting like a little melodramatic emo child. That’s not him being dark it’s him being a brat. And while later in the story might show instances of his parents neglect it’s too late, it should have already been shown before and nothing really makes the childishness displayed understandable.
| Tsuruga Lia1412 chapter 25 . 7/25
Muy interesante. Me encanta.
| Trainion chapter 20 . 7/10
Is it a big knocker?
| Ironcoil chapter 25 . 7/1
One of the best WBWL stories ive ever read! The OC characters youve created and the differences youve added to the story make it very originl and fun. Truly hope youll return to this as i really want to see how Hadrian changes things going forward and how the hidden group influences things. Thanks for the amazing read!
| crashthisnow chapter 1 . 6/19
What the actual F are you trying to portrait his little sister as? a demented F or something, it's not like you want us to have difficulty with reading so this is one of those moments where you ignore the show don't tell rules of writing unless you're goal is to hate her because of association her with her babbling.
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/24
when will the next chapter be posted?
| thea11 chapter 25 . 4/28
A quand la suite ?
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/28
The last two or three chapters have degraded the story severely. You went from an easy 7 or 8 out of ten rating down to a five at best and it’s still falling. I think I will just stop here even if you do ever write more as I’m only getting more and more disappointed at the direction the story has taken.
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 25 . 4/24
Yeah this whole chapter is unbelievable and ridiculous.
Arianna is alive, somehow. She's in the shadows and seems bent on controlling and/or destroying the world.
Flamels are in some kind of secret world controlling/ending thing.
Yuri is OP, Ashley is some secret agent.
Really went down the drain here, sorry.
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 24 . 4/24
Yuri is ridiculous. Really, a different dimension?
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 23 . 4/24
What's the reasoning behind Maxime's and Karkaroff's scores?
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 18 . 4/23
If the dress ends barely above her ankles, then how does it show her long tanned legs?
Also I thought her skin was like white/creamy or silvery or something?