|Reviews for Harry Potter and The Veela|
| korlinki chapter 7 . 7/20
I rly don't know how this story got 10k if every letter says how to hard be Vela and dialogue between Hary and parent is copy paste. below average story 3/10
| alexhively815 chapter 1 . 7/12
Will Harry ever reconcile with his parents?
| Hmason chapter 1 . 6/30
I WILL SHOW THEM ALL, I WILL RISE ABOVE THEM AND BECOME THE MOST POWERFUL SORCERER IN THE WORLD! but first a sandwich
| Daniel2398 chapter 4 . 6/22
So far, pretty good
| HarukaTsukinoTenoh chapter 25 . 6/19
ohhhhh, big cliffy, when are you gonna update?
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/17
You DO know that Blaise Zabini is male...RIGHT?
| kirosyamcha chapter 4 . 6/7
so far I like the story :) there may have been a little too much sneering going on in the first few chapters but havent noticed it as much this one! keep up the good work while i binge read :D
| Xavras chapter 25 . 5/23
divulging paths or diverging paths?
previous grammatical errors are it hard to determine which you meant
but alas, 2 1/2 years since the last update
so, we are left to ponder - how is Arianna Dumbledore still around, appearing so young, and apparently running this FSF
she took out Gellert - so she may well have plans for her brother - who is an idiot at times
and Nicholas Flamel calmly considering how this all fits together
and Harry is having bizarre dreams - presumably the horcrux is taking on parts of his persona and tormenting him
which means that once Harry deals with that he will be right pissed with Riddle
and what exactly is Yuri (and the skank model turned secret agent type) up to with all of this
what is Yuri's father up to?
avoiding capture, speaking with Lucius who does not seem to be truly on board with Riddle and his followers - but so much has been left out it leaves us all to wonder and wait for the next reveal
which sadly does not appear to be happening
should be done with college any time now if I am following th timeline of your narrative
| Xavras chapter 23 . 5/23
leaves change color in September in Scotland - not November...
and - why the nose bleed? magic shouldn't do that?
he has no scar - does he have the horcrux? probably - he has had visions of Riddle - but where is this horcrux?
and the skank of a model hasn't reared her oh too full herself head in a while...
is she that stupid to not realise anything she would do to try and separate harry and Fleur would fail?
| Xavras chapter 22 . 5/23
minor grammatical errors aside
how is Quirrel alive if Volde is no longer possessing him and is in his homunculus form?
how is it that Dumbledore is so stupid in this story?
"I have no idea why Harry is so strong and smart and the boy who lived is a useless near squib..."
also, if Rosy is now 7...she must have been born right as Harry started at Hogwarts...how could he possibly be so close to her as he would have been away at school - happily away from his family which he hates?
clearly the Malfoy have been replaced by the Notts - but how exactly did the Malfoy become friends with Sirius and Remus?
| Xavras chapter 17 . 5/22
flat screen TV
what year is this?
flat screens were not being used in the 1990s
| Mizukodai chapter 8 . 5/16
Yeah you f***ed up when you pansified him like that, shove off.
| Hoegh chapter 25 . 5/13
hope you update soon, waited so long for this, even if you get someone to adopt it will be fine by me, I just wanna see it through ...
| Shu Ouma GC chapter 17 . 5/12
Well... Harry might be the Heir of Black Family and the Potter Family so maybe Elena have a chance but we will see.
| it's just another primate chapter 5 . 5/3
Oh god the twilight refrence, why.. ;-;