Reviews for Harry Potter and The Veela
alittlelate chapter 25 . 9/7
Personally I am team Elena all the way in this one
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12
Wow, how pissy. First chapter and already both Dumbledore, Snape, and Lily bashing.

And a fucking pissy emo childish Harry that you think is "dark".
Big.Daddy.Dudders chapter 7 . 8/1
You keep repeating things in your sentence. If you start an exchange with of course try not to end with it as well.
Big.Daddy.Dudders chapter 5 . 8/1
Why does Fleur think with a French/English accent? Lol
Monkey King Omega chapter 10 . 7/27
James has good point here
ToddGilliss chapter 25 . 7/27
More to come?
trainreader chapter 15 . 7/6
if you continue this: in French the word chérie adapts to the person so if you adress a woman you say ma chérie and to a man mon chéri
Daphn3 Greengras5 chapter 3 . 7/3
we know your a pjo fan
Daphn3 Greengras5 chapter 3 . 7/3
ced stands his ground as well and we all know how that played out. rip Cedric, you are still my favourite puff even after your passing.
Daphn3 Greengras5 chapter 1 . 7/3
I've read this many times but I always come back.
Nad19 chapter 6 . 7/1
Menow, that's absolutely unrealistic! 70%?!

Others: That's your problem?!
jaqmaq77 chapter 25 . 5/29
And now I'm so baffled I think I'm not even in Kansas anymore, and I somehow missed the twister... where am I and what happened? Somehow, I'm not in the same story I was in two chapters ago. Colour me confused...
jaqmaq77 chapter 24 . 5/29
Twenty four chapters in and you add extra characters that slew the story from the main road into the unknown? So... are we now following a black cat down a coal mine at midnight on the new moon wearing a blindfold? You have officially lost me... I don't think I could follow you in a fresh field of snow...
jaqmaq77 chapter 4 . 5/28
loving the story so far, quite an interesting twist.
Just one little niggle... How do you confuse Ron Weasley?
Put him in round room and tell him to sit in the corner...
or tell him to score in the top right corner of the hoop...
other than that, great writing - just a pity it's unfinished.
Efthee chapter 7 . 5/17
the story idea is good. the romance is just wierd in my opinion, i do like how harry feels guilt when his mother or father feels sorry
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