Reviews for Final Piece of my Heart
Guest chapter 2 . 2/22
HOLY SHIT I UNDERSTOOD THE LAST A\N part
Samster687 chapter 15 . 2/1
Why did you stop writing this?! You haven't even gotten to the best part yet! What the hell man?! How could you just drop this story like that?!
Guest chapter 15 . 1/10
Nice Update plz!
JD chapter 15 . 1/6
Hurry with the next chapter I'm on the edge of my chair
thedoctor.johnny chapter 2 . 12/18/2014
your name is more suicidal than latias,seriously you've got issues
alexander.spink chapter 9 . 12/9/2014
Oh dear arceus that motto I'm still laughing
The Aura Pokehuman chapter 15 . 10/31/2014
I loved it, MAKE MORE PLEASE!?
Phoenix Skyfire chapter 15 . 10/5/2014
I want more
Sterling Blade chapter 15 . 10/1/2014
Did it die again..? I miss this story a good bit.. You have a good handle on battle description might I add
AnthonyC22 chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
I was wondering when Jessie, James, Meowth and the gang would show up, but not like this! Great story, loved when those goof showed up!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/9/2014
Good fanfic. Will you please write the next chapter? It's been almost a year.
chris1606 chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
...Damn, this was a good read. In the future, though, I'd suggest you break the paragraphs (Not sure if i got that right) into smaller pieces of text. I had to concentrate far more than should be necessary to keep my eyes from jumping from one bit of text to another at random.
toothleblufire chapter 4 . 8/1/2014
You are one of the best fanfiction writers for a pokemon love story ever.
nlittle4au chapter 15 . 7/24/2014
LOVE IT
thor94 chapter 15 . 7/4/2014
good fic.
Obvious ash is chocked about fighting his mother.
So why ash doesn't catch latias to secure her?
i hope ash will prevent tobias to catch her.
do you plan a next chapter? So about pokemon i really want mewtwo go in ash team
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