|Reviews for Final Piece of my Heart|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/22
HOLY SHIT I UNDERSTOOD THE LAST A\N part
| Samster687 chapter 15 . 2/1
Why did you stop writing this?! You haven't even gotten to the best part yet! What the hell man?! How could you just drop this story like that?!
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/10
Nice Update plz!
| JD chapter 15 . 1/6
Hurry with the next chapter I'm on the edge of my chair
| thedoctor.johnny chapter 2 . 12/18/2014
your name is more suicidal than latias,seriously you've got issues
| alexander.spink chapter 9 . 12/9/2014
Oh dear arceus that motto I'm still laughing
| The Aura Pokehuman chapter 15 . 10/31/2014
I loved it, MAKE MORE PLEASE!?
| Phoenix Skyfire chapter 15 . 10/5/2014
I want more
| Sterling Blade chapter 15 . 10/1/2014
Did it die again..? I miss this story a good bit.. You have a good handle on battle description might I add
| AnthonyC22 chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
I was wondering when Jessie, James, Meowth and the gang would show up, but not like this! Great story, loved when those goof showed up!
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/9/2014
Good fanfic. Will you please write the next chapter? It's been almost a year.
| chris1606 chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
...Damn, this was a good read. In the future, though, I'd suggest you break the paragraphs (Not sure if i got that right) into smaller pieces of text. I had to concentrate far more than should be necessary to keep my eyes from jumping from one bit of text to another at random.
| toothleblufire chapter 4 . 8/1/2014
You are one of the best fanfiction writers for a pokemon love story ever.
| nlittle4au chapter 15 . 7/24/2014
| thor94 chapter 15 . 7/4/2014
Obvious ash is chocked about fighting his mother.
So why ash doesn't catch latias to secure her?
i hope ash will prevent tobias to catch her.
do you plan a next chapter? So about pokemon i really want mewtwo go in ash team