|Reviews for Final Piece of my Heart|
| Western-Otaku chapter 9 . 1/16
That motto was perfect haha, and poor Espeon, guy doesn't deserve what he went through.
| ShadowBlad398 chapter 16 . 9/29/2017
run drake run
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/9/2017
How could you say no to Cynthia? If pokemon relation ships are illegal I don't know how that isn't.
| Verdauga chapter 9 . 2/25/2017
Please, quit making me cry. You're too good at it.
| Electron97 chapter 9 . 1/9/2017
Team rocket. I'm dieing. ROFL.
| yoy56 chapter 9 . 1/4/2017
that team rocket thing was hilarious after reading just Jessie's first line I thought "oh ash has a maid?" then after the second I thought "oh no wasn't team rocket destroyed?" then I finally figured out that they are the cleaning crew lol
| yoy56 chapter 4 . 1/3/2017
I like the story you gave for ash's father in all of the stories I have read and theories on who is ash's father (take it that a have only seen one or two theories on that but) I have never heard of the possibility that she was raped (even though it is one of the biggest possibilities out there only under the theory of ash's father died)
| AtomicGeneral25 chapter 18 . 9/12/2016
The new idea looks pretty interesting, can't wait to see it.
| guess chapter 18 . 8/31/2016
i think that you must leave discontinued this fic instead of deleted it, because many people like it too.
Besides you can post the rewrite separated of the original, many writers make this to preserve the original fanfic while they post the rewrite.
But this alternative only if you accept it, this is your fic after all.
| Zargon654 chapter 18 . 8/31/2016
Hey now...why are you attacking your own story...that's my job...and...Seriouslly! I loved this story and now your telling me that you've stopped writing it! I'm about to blow a gasket. The story doesn't need to be believable. It's freaking Pokemon for Christ sake. It's all not really believable. And that's the beauty of it. It's supposed to bring people together...not have them all bowing down to it like its a god. This story should continue. Or I will find you and make you continue it...no...even better...I'll sick pikachu on you to do some convincing. With gaskets still intact, Zargon564!
| ChaosFox60 chapter 18 . 8/30/2016
That was truly interesting, I have never read a time travel story with they pairing being ash and Latias. I do hope you do something like this cause this does sound interesting
| xtremeg80567993 chapter 18 . 8/30/2016
are you going to do a rewrite?
| Lover of Pokemon chapter 18 . 8/30/2016
hm. quite interesting. I look forward to this!
| Phoenix chapter 8 . 8/30/2016
Now, you are going to go to Altomare. You will go to Latias and beg her for forgiveness for leaving her alone for so long. Now I know you still feel apprehensive about courting a pokemon, so you're going to take the relationship slow. You are going to date her, bring her flowers and chocolates, and all the other things males do to make a girl feel special. And most of all Ash, you are going to enjoy every second of it.' Espeon's face was now mere inches away from Ash's, and the glare he was giving was cold enough to make Ash's blood freeze.
'And Arceus forbid, should you dare try to run off or foist some excuse to try and get out of this, I will hurt you. Trainer or no, friend or no, I. Will. Hurt. You. I will make you scream. I will make you plead for mercy, and I will not stop, because no matter how much I hurt you, you've hurt Latias ten times worse than anything I could come up with, and that's saying something. Now, are we clear?' Too terrified to speak, Ash just barely managed to nod. Only then did Espeon get off of him, and let him rise.
*biggest jaw drop in the world *
| Foreman88 chapter 18 . 8/30/2016
There is nothing wrong with being cliche, especially in this case because very few of the stories using the cliche are any good. Most have really bad grammar, don't know what plot is, and have never heard of a contraction. Because yours is one of very few stories that is actually good, I would say the cliches don't matter. But if you feel the need to start over, then I guess I will just have to wait for the redo. Thanks for the good story anyway.