this was good

Interesting story.

This is amazing. I really love it! Very excellent study into John's head.

Oh, well done! He doesn't need to fully 'get it,' but he just needs to see where John is coming from. Trying is better than nothing.

I really liked this. You are an excellent writer! Here's hoping that you are not still unemployed.

Full of feels. Utterly full of them and they are, mostly, warm fuzzy ones.

This is fantastic! So many wonderful moments... The beginning, where John explains his thoughts - there's a sort of quiet power in the words "This was someone's home" and the way it changes to "is." I'm also particularly fond of the bit that says 'Behind him Lewis Ford probably would have shifted uncomfortably at the tension, had he been alive. "Well, I'll just. Erm. I didn't mean to cause any trouble."' It's just such an unexpectedly humorous moment :)

The scene itself is such a good capture of Sherlock-being-Sherlock and John-trying-to-change-him - thank you for bringing it to life!

Best,
Lena

I loved this! It felt so authentic. You did an excellent job with John showing Sherlock how he feels. You really have Sherlock's character down. It would have been so weird if Sherlock had instantly become more empathetic. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

That was brilliant.

'We must be careful, this was someone's home.' Definitely looking for a chance to say that in the future. XD You know, next time I see a dead body.

But really, the comparison of dead bodies to empty houses is beautiful and completely fitting, and I love John and Sherlock's back-and-forth. Oh the bromance.

Keep writing!

Toasty

A really beautiful story that felt very in character.

Whoa! Your character portrayals are fantastic! I loved the interaction between them all, the small bits and every acerbic remark that added depth to the story. Thanks so much for writing!

Okay, what make me most happy/giddy in your story?

That you made John married, presumed widower. I always visualize him as one.

Cheers!

that was too good for words. too amazing for me to even try to explain! o my god how wonderful it was! this is the kind of story that makes you give up on hope of ever having a happy ending or any opinions that these two have of each other change back to what they were before that day in the morgue. But you bring them back and better for it, thro the storm and better people because of it. there's too much to say! if only i had the words like you do! it was funny soo funny and sad and disgusting and sick and angry! and brilliant! i wish this story could be written in Sherlock's pov also! this story will be very very hard to beat and one i will always re read! ...thank you (bless youuu ;) hehe)

-KM

Your stories are wonderful. I love John's figuring out how to make Sherlock see his point of view on this.