Reviews for Out of the Ordinary
MatingInspires chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Would love more of this ;)
Edward's spouse chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
excellent.
Naomi M chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I would love for u to turn this into a story
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Bella definitely got more than she bargained for at the party ;D

Great job!
FizzyPop's'n'FlipFlops.x chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
fantastic! This has potential to be a fully fledged story!
VioletVirgo79 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Best One Shot Ever!

LL
keyecullen chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Well holy moly that was hot! I'm guessing that life will not be so boring now, will it? *giggle*

Keye
ENAddict chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Loved your Domward! C x
Beans827 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Okay, so I see you have written more and another very good endeavor! This was very good too! Great job!
Coriejo24 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
This was amazing. I would love to read more *hinthintwinkwink*
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Pretty good
bella c'ella luna chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
i can totally see you continuing this story and turning it into a multi-chapter fic. it would be interesting to see how bella learns and how edward teaches.

for some of your first writing ever this was very good! i hope you keep it up :)
mizMandy chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
This was great, you should really continue with this story, I would love to see some more of her training.
HunterBrooke chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
AMAZING! You really need to continue this store.
tds88 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I don't know why I read O/S, all they ever do is leave me feeling fictionally frustrated. I always want more. Most of the BDSM stories I read have Bella as the Domme so this is a new side. I would love to see this continued. Great O/S.
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