Reviews for Submission
A Neverending Dream of Flight chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
That was amazing. This is probably the best sexual scene I've ever read, or one of the best at least. It was nice how you used the act to further enhance the emotions, rather than using the emotions as a sidebar to the act. I really enjoyed reading the character interpretations of the situation; because of how skillfully they were written the entire fic seemed so much more intimate than it probably would have been otherwise. This was a beautiful fic; great job and keep up the good work
looptheloopy chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
This. Oh my freaking... THIS. FFFFF I could portray this in so many ways. Just, Woah! So good!
Cliscia chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
No I-I- I love you. Thank you. Thank you so much. Everything about this is beautiful, you got the relationship just write and the sex was wonderful. Malik's orgasm was so sexy, how tight she got before cumming a-and- o-oh it's just lovely, and the love between them and Mariku admitting it at the end and Malik crying and oh my god yes I love this, I love you. Thank you so much.
djfhldkjhglkajshflkjahslfkjhas chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I love you, I love everything about you, and I love your stories. ;~~~; YOU'RE SO GOOD AT CONSENSUAL. I mean, for someone that doesn't really write that kinda stuff this is A :DD

Of course Malik likes being dominated~* It's so glorious :]

I like derped to you about this over msn so I really don't know what else to say OTL.