Reviews for Broken Wings
jesi ki kage chapter 26 . 3/1
Not bad. Some interesting alterations and character tweaks. I must admit that the whole graveyard scene kinda through me off. Well played out even if seemed a little thrown together. Not sure what I think of the whole Kyuubi chakra thing yet. Over all well done. Thanks for writing, -Jesi Ki Kage
Bananarock509 chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
This... Is awesome...
mds777 chapter 26 . 10/21/2014
sweet story.:) Is there going to be a sequel to this story?
AgorasDarkfire chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
I must say that youre a great writer, even though this story(or at least the begining isn't very original). But you made a very big an very ( at least to those watch and read Naruto) obvious mistake. ANBU black ops are the elite of the elite, one of the best shinobi and kunouchi, second only to sannin and hokage.. And in your story they get distracted in battle just because someone says something. Or in Naruto's case,I know he' s supposed to be a knucklehead but dude you made him an ANBU so he should act like that. He can still be afraid of ghosts and a ramen worshiper but come on he should be more composed and serious( at least on a mission or in public). Still you'r said before, you're a great writer you should just be more careful about matching their personalities to their age and/or ranks.

tridemonnaruto chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
ok what the hell Sakura was supposed to report what she saw in moodys office to the leader or anything suspicious really so why are they still so clueless this shinobi you portray are not ANBU they are gennin so just have them drop the mask cause they don't even deserve the mask they are wearing if they can't put the clues they have to proper use hell they are acting more like children then adults and they are 17 what kind of Naruto characters are you trying to portray? Because they are way to stupid and blind to facts and observations they have had I mean they already have multiple clues saying moody is not to be trusted or at the very least too suspicious and here were the clues you showed

1. when moody first arrived the ninjas reported him covered in some energy
2. black mentioned an attack on moody but was dismissed by the news
3. the chest in the room radiated large energy when detected by sakura and it radiated an energy similar to moody but moody's was less intense compared to the chest but the same none the less

all those mentioned should have made the shinobi guards more attentive to what moody is doing and they should have investigated his room already
tridemonnaruto chapter 11 . 8/4/2014
Ok another chapter with un-ninja like characteristic slug(Sakura) felt the chest being suspicious but does not alert the others of it. I wanna know what kind of ANBU training they went through because this specific ones kinda suck at it letting all this clues and suspicious events pass like they were still gennins making all this simple mistakes go.
tridemonnaruto chapter 8 . 8/4/2014
you know that as shinobi the moment Cat(Hinata) felt the felling of dizziness she should have been more suspicious and should have alerted fox(Naruto) of the event so that it can be investigated I mean they are ninja they should be able to asses such events with annoying detail its actually out of character for them to dismiss anything like feeling a slight dizzy spell because like I said earlier they are ninja and things like that could get them killed if ignored. Also they are ANBU they should be more alert about things like that and be more suspicious about it too.
NightsBlackRose13 chapter 26 . 6/19/2014
I don't see what you mean about this being a shit story, it was pretty fucking good. I love how you stressed that the ninja were tools. Most people forget that. I also like who you didn't make their relationships the plot of the sorry. Fuck what the others say, I like it so they can shove their bad reviews up their ass for all I care. :P
To lazy to login chapter 7 . 6/18/2014
So how do you do line breaks? When I saw that I got all excited thinking you would say it but I guess not. My username is coralflower I'm just too lazy to login because it's troublesome to login on my phone so if you could pm me how to do it I'd be very grateful :) I love your story so far.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/17/2014
'Course he can, 'Cause he's awesome. Rasenshuriken, people, RASENSHURIKEN!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/17/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
I translated it (THANK YOU GOOGLE!) and Shinobi translates into Pilfering. I don't know what a pilfering even IS...
celmiji chapter 16 . 5/28/2014
I clicked the button...
KyaNika chapter 26 . 3/31/2014
I know that you don't especially like this fanfic, but I certainly do! I know its cheesy, but I still love it all the same. Faults and all :)
Cina1325 chapter 26 . 3/16/2014
this was such a great story! thank you
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