Reviews for Betrayal
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 1/5
very nice
moira33 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
I am a little confused so he just pretended to be angry because he knew all along the end of the message ?O_O
Ladyquinte chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
My review is so late. Sorry. I didn’t see the movie yet *ouch...the poor me*, but I read the plot in wikianime so I understand what are you telling me about.

And I love the way you explain the story. I’ll fave it!


XFangHeartX chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Awesome alternate ending!
dragoniall chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
they should replace the real ending with this one. XD Nice fic. Good Job :D
xSolitude's Shadowx chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
It was a cute enough movie, but this would have made it pure awesome. -
Mike Turner 1 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I don't care what anyone says now...THIS is the ending to Strong World XD

Oda just...forgot to put it in...somehow...
Rizzz chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
This is a good take on the ending of SWM xD

I heard from the interview that Oda lessened the centering of the movie from LuNa by adding animals fight because he thought that adults may enjoy the LuNa centric movie, but young males (which is the target consumer of shounen mangas) might not enjoy the movie thus monster things was created

Also Oda really tries hard not to add any romance in the story, perhaps we can see a similar scenario in the end?

Thank you for this! :)
Dark Leg Sanji chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
OMG...This is the ending that i want to see from SWM

Sadly this's not happening...(

But i'm satisfied with this one. Thank you _

your fic make my day...XD
foxchicka19 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I was expecting something similar to this too! XD A nice, cute little exchange between the two. And it should have totally gone down something similar to this.

Darn you, Oda, for refusing to let there be romance between characters because it's a shounen manga (place angry face here)