|Reviews for two seconds away from home|
| a warrior queen chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
T_T this is the best i've read so far, out of my little circle.
| xxSilverEchoxx chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Loved it! :)
| al2010 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I really liked this story. It was sweet how Sakura stood up to Sasuke's father for him.
| m00kie chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
This was infinitely lovely. You've always been so good with themes and motifs, and it was a joy to read your writing once again. Having a civilian Sakura was really original, and I liked this Sasuke because he actually cared for her. I always find Sakura's affection for Sasuke inexplicable, but this story did a good job of showing what she sees in him. Continue to streamline your number of characters; you did it very well in this fic, though I found Ino unecessary.
I keep thinking about all the reviews I've written for you, and I regret that I haven't praised you nearly enough for your capacity to write a beautiful story. I've sent a lot of criticism in what I thought was my own literary maturity, when I hardly understood art at all. You've helped me to realize that sometimes art is created for the sake of itself and doesn't need some great overaching meaning.
The past few months must have been busy for you what with grade 12 and university applications and everything, but hopefully now you can relax a bit (and write!). From the number of reviews you've already gotten today, I'm sure you have many readers eagerly awating more. Update soon! :]
| IPreferLemonPie chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I didn't like it. I loved it. Really. I had a knot in my throat, I wanted to cry so badly but I was on skype so I couldn't afford myself to cry because Ian would've asked and I hate to cry infront of him, I hate worrying him.
It was just so amazing, I loved it. It was just so, so great. And I want to cry because your stories always make me cry, I loved it. You are such an awesome author, your writing is so beautiful. I'm your number one fan.
| DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
oh my god. I'm totally moved by this.
I... I... I... I can't even find the words. T_T
Just loved it. Love, love, it! Terribly good job!
| Laforet chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
It's good to have you back posting stories again. This one was awesome. I liked the scene with Sakura and the kunai and how there was a band-aid in the bottom of the box. Sasuke knew she was going to cut herself with it and he had prepared. I loved Mikoto talking some sense into her husband. I'm glad Fugaku finally came around and let Sakura be with Sasuke because she really loved him. And before I forget, I loved Sakura being a civilian this time around. That was a different, fresh twist on things. I'm sad that this was only a one-shot, though. Anyway, thanks for an amazing story and I look forward to reading more in the future.
| KayleighDUCK chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Oh my goodness, I'm not even going to lie, this is amazing. o3o All of your stories are amazing, though — so it's not surprise. It's just so fantastic that you can just type something out and it turns out to be wonderful. (: I love how in-character they are, too — well, it's non-massacre, so Sasuke shouldn't be a buttface like he is now. xD
| foreversnow chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
This was so cute! I haven't read a story like this in forever
Glad to see you're still writing! c:
| luberries chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
ahhh! I don't normally review that much.. but I missed reading your stories and I'm so happy that you posted this one. It pretty much made my day!
| fireblazie chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Why are your Sasuke/Sakura stories always so brilliant? Really, I don't think there's a single Sasuke/Sakura fic by you I didn't love. For something you "puked out" it's so amazing. I'm so jealous, ha ha. Stuff I "puke out" is - well, let's not go there.
SO MANY THINGS I LOVE ABOUT THIS. The way you portrayed Sakura's growth and the way she stuck by Sasuke throughout it all despite her being a civilian, and Sasuke's unspoken devotion to her, too, and ahhh I could go on and on but I do have to study sometime, so I'll stop here. Just know that I truly adore your writings, my dear :D
| andthenshesaid chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Ohmygod. This was amazing. Just. Asdkfsdkfj. I have no words for how this was.
I mean, really. I kind of love every second of it.
"Sasuke mutters something about always being free on Sunday afternoons." & "Not now, not ever - not in ten different lifetimes. Sakura will never abandon Sasuke."
Just. God. It was so cute.
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| SHOUTxKarina chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
This is like the epitome of cute! Good job :)
| Ekun-Asha chapter 1 . 4/2/2011