|Reviews for Immune|
| Itachiforever342 chapter 21 . 2/13
*overcome with happiness* Gah...this is so much win...
You stayed true to the characters and had me giggling like a little girl! To date, you're the best writer of Skip Beat fanfiction I've found on this site! You win everything!
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/27/2013
I can't believe this took you only four months! This is by far my favorite Skip Beat! fic and I just want to say THANK YOU! for writing it. It is wonderful in every way
| sloppywalrus chapter 3 . 10/21/2013
Isn't Ren a little... OOC?
| Misaki chapter 21 . 9/24/2013
| Jingyee1511 chapter 21 . 9/10/2013
Ahh! allowing Sho back in this discreet way is a wonderful ending to the fic! *squeals in happiness* I like how you brought out the confusion over what names they should go by as well as Kyoko's sense of loss when she was separated from Ren. All in all, I really enjoyed your fic! I was pretty intimidated by the number of chapters in the beginning, but after I start I almost couldn't put it down, and it's just... A very well done piece. Thank you for your hard work!
| Jingyee1511 chapter 20 . 9/10/2013
Hmmm. I would have wished that kyoko's reply to Ren wasn't as public as his confession to her, but I guess it really has an element of spontaneity and realism that makes it nice. *thumbs up*
| Jingyee1511 chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
I have to hand it to you for being a great writer. How you managed to manipulate the crowd, Kyoko and the readers response was just great. *cheers at the progress*
| Jingyee1511 chapter 18 . 9/10/2013
Just when everything was going so well. I was fervently wishing they'd come to a consensus by now, it is saddening to see them guess at what the other wants and guess wrongly. I'm interested to see what you make of the interview though!
| Jingyee1511 chapter 17 . 9/10/2013
After reading how you let Kanae respond to Kyoko I have to add that your different characters have very different styles to replying Kyoko with regards to that relationship she shares with Ren. I like that.
| Jingyee1511 chapter 16 . 9/10/2013
The wonders of a mood ring in bringing about a progress in Kyoko's self discovery and their relationship. Brilliant idea.
| Jingyee1511 chapter 15 . 9/10/2013
Awww I'm so glad Ren managed to get Kyoko's understanding. I quite like how formal-ish his audience was, before becoming the enthusiastic Kyoko once more, eager to know about him. It gives a sense of reality, for I generally thought that if Kyoko knew that Ren was Kuon, she'd scold him first for leaving Kuu...
| Jingyee1511 chapter 14 . 9/10/2013
... Yes, as I mentioned, you really add depth to even the side characters. unless I forgot the story of how Kuu romanced his wife, I have to say that it's great you added it in as your Kuu's characterisation. Nice work.
| Jingyee1511 chapter 13 . 9/10/2013
*really enjoyable. I love your attention to detail.
I liked maria's words too! Saying things just for the sake of saying it really is an accurate statement of what Kyoko's doing with all the love thing. I really like how you maintain each character in character, and how you give them all an opportunity to grow... *thumbs up*
| Jingyee1511 chapter 12 . 9/10/2013
I'm astonished at Ren's control but it was great that it left no leeway for misinterpretation, that Ren was weak or anything. Kyoko's words though... *facepalm* lastly the way Sho analysed their relationship was
| Jingyee1511 chapter 11 . 9/10/2013
I like how you let Yashiro draw Kyoko to the conclusion that she was indeed Ren's ideal girlfriend, though I was assuming that she'd get everything wrong. I really enjoyed Sho's perspective, it was nicely done! Although I felt that him calling Ren "Ren" was out of character...