Так же почему наруто не пошёл к мито когда встретил мать и Вме узнал она могла его просто обучить как соклановца.

То что у нега риннеган круто конечно, но где использование его. Кушина сказала же что будет его учить им пользоваться и где?

The fuck did you make him have casual sex with a random girl for? I'm here for Naruto x Tsunade, not him whoring himself.

The dialogs are very poorly written. Especially when the author tries to write a speech longer than two sentences.

You could have just kept it as an action/slice of life story. It had the potential to be a really good one. Unfortunately you fell for the most common cliche of fanfiction. You ended up making a story that tried too hard to be everything and ended up with a messy story that got way too edgy towards the end.

Couldn’t get passed Kushina’s BS rework in ch2. Not my cup of tea.

update soon

panissha no boru...

weird prose that keeps changing POV like it's a tv show. it's not. the continuous saying of the obvious is grating and there's no personality. why would he even go on a cruise like shit your life is on the line and then go on a vacation. just say it, you were just horny for a moment

I freaking love Naruto and Tsunade relationships

Story had potential like all fanfiction writers who tried to be creative they wrote themselves into a dead end story.

Hi There٫
Rereading this interesting Fic and with one of my best couples,
if you come back one day dear author, I hope for that ending.

Best Regards٫

In a way. It's kinda good that THIS Obito followed. Since I doubt Naruto would let the younger one die this time around. So in a way Obito has to start over while still giving us an ultimate villain.

the way I see it he literally had enough time for Naruto to finish his travel back to the past and then second he landed the entire present they were in just got wiped since it's now the future.

I wish there was a favorite chapter thing to show more appreciation to authors and maybe even a way to help correct grammar per spacing in paragraphs to go through first drafts if someone doesn’t have a bata reeder and give stories a polish level a well