Reviews for River's Revenge
TheCauldron chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
*cackling in a very undignified manner*
chromeknickers chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Pfft, hahaha! Omg, my sides hurt. I could totally picture this, especially Jayne's speak at the end. It's crazy how in character you have him. CRAZY good!
Irishbrneyes chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
OMG! I cannot stop laughing even while I'm typing this. I also can't believe I haven't read this before now. Another great work of fanfic Frisky! Please keep them coming 'cause we really need more Rayne. BRAVO!
kashadarklingleeash350 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
This fanfic was to funny , i laugh everytime i read it !
blueEyre chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Very funny!
NeuroticMusing chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I loved this story! This is one of the funniest stories I've read today!

Let's hope Jayne won't forget to bring her a bowl of soup from now on, haha.

Thanks so much for sharing!
RevDorothyL chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
"It took a very special kind of man to look even remotely intimidating in a kimono that short.

"Jayne was not one of them."

It takes a very special kind of author to come up with lines like that to tickle my sense of humor, and you ARE one of those authors.
jenefaner chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Jayne glared straight ahead as his heavily pregnant wife looked at him with sparkling eyes

My favorite line.

LMFAO
Basched chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
LOL!

This is fantastic! Pure River revenge! Oh Frisk, you have cheered me up even more with this!

Silly Jayne for falling asleep and letting the soup burn! Its a good thing that Mal and Simon were punished as well! I can just picture them now!

Of course, River being pregnant and unable to wear the dresses, it makes sense that Jayne has to dress up for her!

Brilliance! Utter utter brilliance! XD Thankyou! xxxx
jane0904 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Oh, yes, catch 'em young to learn not to mess with River! Loved this - the dialogue only section worked really well, then into the explanation ... and Mal realising perhaps River had ulterior motives as well as punishment in mind. Although the mental image of him in a pink tank top, skirt and his usual boots will probably stay with me for a long, long time ...
alisosia chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
absalutly loved this had to reread it 4 times
bob0045 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Loves it. Light hearted fluff in the morning is a better starter to the day than breakfast.
Dherea chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Too frickin' funny. I am in a serious Master's level class reading this. I am trying hard not to smile and laugh out loud! Brilliant as always!
Roxie i do byte chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Lmao o thats hilarious
Ali chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Cute!
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