Reviews for Pain
Arwen17evenstar chapter 2 . 4/24/2011
sorry I didn't review right away. There's so much stuff going on right now.

I like it, but at the same time, in my imagination, I just can't imagine Mab breaking down in front of Frik. Maybe this is something she would have done back in her younger years, that's a possibility, but I can't see the Mab we have in the movie doing something like this. Its sad, but she's too calloused by war at this point. If she were to break down, she'd do it alone where there was no chance of anyone happening upon her.

But don't stop! I adore all Mab fanfic no matter what form it comes in!
Wake The White Queen chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Awwwwwww Mab I love fics where Frik comforts her. It's so cute. Go Frik shame he's so not like this in the movie xx
Zoisy chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Thank you very much, both of you.

Since I was so inspired and infinitely honoured by your beautiful comments, I'm gonna do a sequel, as soon as I catch some time.

-I promise, for your lovely comments inspired me to get on with the story.

Thanks again :)
Wake The White Queen chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Omg this is so sad I love it so much. Awww Mab. I agree with what Arwen said. Im gutted it's complete as I'd love to have found out if Mab saw him and her reaction. I hope you write another Mab story :D xoxo
Arwen17evenstar chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
oh god this is epic. What a beautiful, beautiful piece of work. Stunning. You made me love Mab even more, if that's even possible.