|Reviews for Life is now|
| zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
| Kaze and Kiba chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
The language is good and I like that Sakura still cares. You could really make it great if you rewrote the last three or four paragraphs.
I don't want to criticize but they really seem rushed and crushed altogether compared to the flow of the rest. And the last part with Naruto I would either expand it a little or delete it cause right now it just kind of dangles.
You might ask Sakura's Indecision for advice about it. She's my beta and really smart on these things but, I think if you stretched out those last paragraphs and took time to explain the feelings there and added a little more diaolgue or things like a look or a tender touch and how it made him feel human or her feel hope again or something it could really improve your oneshot.
Thanks for the fic,
| Tiger Priestess chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I think the only way Sasuke can snap out of his revenge mode would be if Itachi did appear to him. Or if he has a near-death experience...
Short and sweet, SasuSaku forever!