Reviews for And She Wondered
wtchcool chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Aw. Poor Jamie. :/ No wonder she's so messed up. Not only are her feelings unrequited, but on top of that you have Peter as an incompetent father and husband.

Nice fic (even with the one-sided Vinwell). There's just one typo I want to point out. Mostly you spelled Trip's name correctly with one P, but at one point there you wrote: "...the way Vince loved Tripp" with an extra P.
Redmage2 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Oh, absolutely lovely. You manage to hit a great balance with Orwell's character. I very much enjoyed reading this!
Gotham Siren chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
This was a really good look into Orwell's mind. I enjoyed this!

The Red Fedora chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
It seems the bane of the superhero that each feels they must live their life in solitude. Thankfully for their sake most of them do not end up alone. I hope Orwell finds happiness in the future - she deserves it.

Nice story.
sfulton229 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Terrific look at what might have been. Vince is a loving father and shame that Orwell missed out on that. The longing that Orwell has for a normal life really comes thru here as does her resignation that she has a bigger fight to wage. Thanks for posting this; hope the present was enjoyed!