Reviews for l a s t s t a n d
controlled climb chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I completely agree with you. I can totally see Harry getting up and saying this to a bunch of people. I really loved the bit in brackets and also really liked the way you formatted the word ‘fades’. It looked pretty cool, not gonna lie. And I also thought that the last sentence was fantastic, although it was the second last the really stood out to me because even though they’ve won the war, all they were left with was rubble and destruction and pain and they’ve got to try work through that and that just sounds awful. Awesome poem.
lowi chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Loved loved LOVED it! Especially this: "(& a little wand work, regardless of Spellotape)" :D
macdennischardee chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
:DD Even though this wasn't slash, I still loved it! ;D

I love the song, too, btw!

I can so picture Harry and Ron having this convo.

I loved this part:

"& new choices

·new destinies·




:) h(:

about it

but do so with arms wide

( )

for friends&&adversaries alike,

because if it doesn't

kill! you,"

That part was my absolute favourite lines. It was brilliant and true and just so happy that it made me smile and laugh and dab at my eyes all at the same time! :)

I love your freeverses. Best ones ever. :)