Reviews for You'll Need to Hear the Whole Story
Asmodeus Poisonteeth chapter 19 . 3/23
Way late to the party, but I really enjoyed your writing. Hope at some point you'll come back and finish it!
kerruan18 chapter 19 . 9/14/2014
I love every minute of this story. I especially love the banter between Hawke and Isabela. It's funny to see love interests in a story act this way lol. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 19 . 9/16/2013
Eagerly awaiting your next update, hope you continue this story.
BizarreBard chapter 19 . 8/23/2013
I love this story, looking forward to more :)
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 19 . 7/30/2013
Please update, i have adored pmadgmg this so far and it seems like there is a huge amount you could do with it. I love your portrayal of the characters and you absolutely have them in character at all times. An excellent plot line and a great use of the original plot line. Please please update :)
flaze chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
"Pack quicker. We need to more\

spelling error in the first line never good.
6thfloormadness chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
It's been over a year since the story was updated and that is a shame because it was really good. I am saddened by its apparent death.
gamings-reminiscence chapter 19 . 11/27/2012
It is really unhealthy how badly i'm wishing you had continued this story T-T But from past experience i know that if it's been a year since you've updated, the story's probably dead :(

Ah well, thanks for potentially one of the better M!Hawke/Isabella fics i've read in awhile. You got the characterizations down pretty damn perfectly and i loved the pacing of the story. Props to only keeping the sidequests that had an overlapping theme in all 3 Acts in the story. Argh it was all so GOOD -_-

It has so much potential and i already love what you've done with it. But if the inspirarion is gone, it's gone sadly enough, and trying to force the muse back would only bring back a rushed piece and that would make your snarky Hawke sad. Regardless, thank you for the immensely entertaining read. I think I'm gonna play Dragon Age tomorrow xD
D chapter 19 . 5/5/2012
I just begun this story and after the first two chapters I'm pretty sure I'll like it, it seems to be one of the few ones that actually offers a good portrayal of a MHawke Mage which is not a slash while I've read some stories of this type that were particularly interesting, it's more easy for me to relate to this setup especially in the romance aspect of the story. (And the Anders, Fenris, Sebastien pairing becomes dull: they literally flood the fandom.)

Besides that, I noticed something that bother me a little: Lyrium use, I don't know if it will be a great part of you plot but I'am pretty sure that it is raw lyrium that is addictive and not the one processed in potions. Beside that, Mages don't seems to suffer any ill effect from lyrium even in his raw state ( The Fade and the lyrium met there for example. Mages are seriously different from mundanes peoples on Thedas by their link to the fade and the fact they use directly lirium simply in using their powers...anyway, of course we can say that in your version of the story Lyrium is addictive but well...if Mages were to really need to deal with things like addiction by using these potions there wouldn't be a Empire of Mages like Tevinter that just couldn't work.

Besides that, Lyrium replenish a energy that they all ready have, shouldn't we suppose by that that they are quite literally imbued all ready of lyrium ? If you need some sort of issue for Hawke to deal with maybe a sort intoxication due to a abundance in lyrium could do it. Even substance like water that are not dangerous to us normally, and that we are composed of, can be lethal in excess.

The case of the templar is particular, they are literally mundane people who use lyrium like any drugs of performance like PCP in a way . Mages on the contrary can be said to use a substance that is necessary for them. Hey, it would be more logical to evokes a dependency to Lyrium: Mages couldn't live without it for example. Anyway it's only my take on things. Good work on the fic.
LightningIsBadass chapter 19 . 1/18/2012
Reading whole story on iPod o.e almost... Done ... So...close...ehhhh.

KEEP WRITINNGGG! Me gusta :)
Taalar chapter 19 . 1/15/2012
enjoyed reading all 19 chapters and sad you stopped. :( email me if you take it back up as I would love to finish it.
ChaoticByDesign chapter 19 . 10/27/2011
I just found this story today and I devoured all 19 in a single sitting. Absolutely wonderful! You've captured the characters perfectly. I can't wait for the next update!
ChaoticByDesign chapter 19 . 10/27/2011
I just found this story today and I devoured all 19 in a single sitting. Absolutely wonderful! You've captured the characters perfectly. I can't wait for the next update!
Adams7 chapter 19 . 10/25/2011
Very nice. i have to admit I'm getting a little nervous about what happens to Carver at the end of Act 1. He was one of my favorite characters and I'm really hopping he joins the Grey Wardens instead of the Templars or -Heaven forbid- Dying. I also really liked how you depicted Carver's crush on Merrill.

Update soon please
Mortal Engines chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
just read through your entire story, definitely one of the best DA2 fanfics out there and the only decent one without M/M or F/F slash! I love your writing and the way you weave in your own ideas and still keep true to the story is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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