| Reviews for Caught Beneath The Landslide |
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   accioneville chapter 1 . 8/23/2011 amazing. just amazing(: |
| Xx.Just-Forget-the-World.xX chapter 9 . 8/6/2011 I love it. Truly amazing |
| Falling-Out-of-Reality chapter 9 . 8/4/2011 Wow this story is great! I love the chemistry! Great job! |
| mykk47 chapter 9 . 8/3/2011 Great chapter. Hope you update again soon. |
| rosebudlilac chapter 9 . 8/2/2011 This is really good. In the other stories that I've read of them, Teddy was super sweet. It's nice to see some variety. Keep it up! |
| Tishica chapter 9 . 8/2/2011 aww you updated and story is progressing nicely ) |
| IcingTheCake chapter 9 . 8/2/2011 Would like to see Teddy's pov too! Update soon! |
| L.A.H.H chapter 9 . 8/2/2011 :D Excellent chapter! I liked their conversation. x |
| blackprongsscarletlily chapter 9 . 8/1/2011 Great chapter, i can't wait for the next one! |
| webbythyme chapter 9 . 8/1/2011 I'd fancy Teddy lupin too. Great chapter! Update soon... or whenever you can. No pressure |
| penguincrazy chapter 9 . 8/1/2011 Loved this chapter! |
| allegrafp chapter 8 . 7/17/2011 Please write more! |
| Dr. Dawg chapter 8 . 7/14/2011 Yeah... I thought chapter 7 was the latest updated chapter, my bad. Cliff hanger. Update. Starting to get interesting that's for sure. |
| Dr. Dawg chapter 7 . 7/14/2011 So I hate things written in first person, but aside from the whole first person thing, it is well written and you have me intrigued. Your grammar is nice and appealing (so don't stop, just because I complimented you on it). I'm excited for you to post the next chapter. The bit in this part about James is good. It's above average fanfiction but lacks a 'wow' factor so perhaps that'll develop. |
| Blue Leah chapter 8 . 7/2/2011 Oooooooohh! One tiny nitpick. You wrote that Victoire could care less about being taller than her date when she wears silver heels, but what you mean is she couldn't care less. I'm sorry for being nitpicky, but I just wanted to point it out. "Could care less" means she cares enough that some of the caring could be taken away to make her care less. "Couldn't care less" means she cares none. |